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On my home from work I called into Clancey’s Bar. Downed a couple of beers, then drove my car. But I was being waited on, so I didn’t get very far, before a blue light flashing made me an instant star. “Have you drank alcohol; please blow in this device”. “Yes I have had two drinks, and I promise no more”. The next few minutes I was shaking like a leaf. “You’ve given a reading and it’s point-o-four”. The relief I felt can be very hard to describe, but two more sips of beer; you can guess the rest. “You’re just under Sir, but you can’t go yet, have you taken any drugs; it’s time for a test”. What have I been eating? I haven’t been smoking, but I haven’t got a clue what they’re looking for. “Wipe this down your tongue and wait a few minutes”. While I waited, it seemed like an hour or more. And while I waited, I just didn’t know what to think. Did someone back in Clancey’s Bar, spike my drink, and as the seconds past, I could feel my heart sink, until the cop said “on your way, your test is negative”. The greatest lesson I learnt from this experience, is the not sure factor ‘til the testing comes back clear. So if you drive a vehicle and you’re on the road, never take drugs or even drink one beer, because you never know; you’re never sure; if there is any surprises, that are for you in store. So if you drive a vehicle and you’re on the road, never take drugs or even drink one beer.

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Date: 9/25/2022 11:42:00 AM
Yes strange twists Laurie, I wonder how some Cops have switched to supporting invasive Lockdowns and experimental jabs though ? I wonder who will point the finger? Who cannot be corrupted? Who does not fail.?
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Date: 10/17/2021 9:18:00 AM
Yes something like what happened to you dear friend can kick start a different lifestyle - traffic police checking cars especially where you don't expect them to be is a reality, and they suddenly appear as you round a corner - you gave wise and sound advice in this poem Lindsay, thanks for sharing. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/17/2021 7:28:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... there is a simple logical answer. Do not take mind altering substances and drive. The pity is, too many still don't get the message though - thanks again Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 10/15/2021 5:51:00 PM
Great advice Lindsay. A relative of mine is an ex fireman and has seen the tragic devastation caused by drink driving. Emilia.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/17/2021 7:24:00 PM
Hello Emilia ... few people think about those who see the results involving vehicle crashes, but it must affect them in time - thank you Emilia - Lindsay
Date: 10/15/2021 1:28:00 PM
Fine write Lindsay with great advice too. very well penned with good rhyme and flow too. Take care, Gordon
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/17/2021 7:20:00 PM
Hello Gordon ... driving with mind altering substances is sheer madness, not only to the guilty one, but for anyone else on the road - thank you for commenting Gordon - Lindsay
Date: 10/12/2021 4:55:00 PM
Excellent advice on this well written piece. Hope all is well your way. All good this way. love phyl
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/17/2021 7:16:00 PM
Hello Phyllis ... thank you. With high vaccination numbers now, we will be coming out of lock-down on Thursday. We might get to see our grand-kids now - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 10/12/2021 5:13:00 AM
This is a great read with great advice my friend On my way to work one night my blinker didn't click off on it's own and I never noticed it A cop did though and she stopped me and asked if I had been drinking I said no because I'm on my way to work and don't drink anyway. She had me blow in that device she had and came back and said with surprise, Zero! You Are My First Zero! I said I know I told you. Guess it's a good thing I didn't use any mouth wash Huh Loved this Lindsay. God Bless, JB
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/17/2021 7:12:00 PM
Hello Judy ... a good story indeed. A friend of mine who doesn't drink was pulled up one Christmas Day and gave an alcohol reading. He had eaten two helpings of wine trifle for lunch - thank you Judy - Lindsay
Date: 10/10/2021 11:27:00 AM
I recall frequently being put on my bike and given a push to get me going because I was too drunk to walk or stand! How could I have been so stupid, with so little regard for the welfare of others? I was never cited because police are never around where needed . . . .
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/17/2021 7:08:00 PM
Hello Rico ... we were all ten foot tall and bulletproof in our younger days, but as we get older most of us curtail our living on the edge - thank you Rico - Lindsay
Date: 10/10/2021 3:35:00 AM
Great advice Lindsay, sadly some idiots still choose to ignore it and drive on regardless. Tom
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/17/2021 7:03:00 PM
G'day Tom ... certainly do Tom. It's when they hurt other people that makes us all really angry - thanks Tom - Lindsay
Date: 10/9/2021 6:16:00 PM
Good advice for certain!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/17/2021 7:00:00 PM
Hello BJ ... too right it is. It can be a very costly adventure if you want to take the chance, but only a fool does that - thanks BJ - Lindsay
Date: 10/9/2021 4:31:00 PM
Excellent advice!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 10/17/2021 6:54:00 PM
Hello Jenna ... I think so. It's just a pity not everybody abides by it - thank you Jenna - Lindsay

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