Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

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Tapestry of Life

 
January 22, 2024
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Divergent viewpoints can arise
Whilst triumphant variously savor
Glorious tune of achievement,
Gain glory as godly guile
Whilst booming into spring blooms
In fervor of zeal, vow faithfully
God bestows on them a swish tree
With a bountiful harvest
Its span is boundless
Akin to an everlasting ring,
However, clocks tick down
Daily weavings of divine honor.

Amidst lustrous obelisk
Unbeknown overall aesthetic
Sprawled across stars haze
My cosmic frame oozes to apex
I harness the strand in crimson
Widening warp and woof
Over that magnificent loom
Queries seldom yield effectiveness,
Sadness for their plight emerged
In bows and flowery swags
We ought to remember
Fetching a fresh format forward
Divine devotion developed.
 
We could detect tangles and flaws
Fairness shares justice and equity
The quest implies grace and faith,
A gorgeous layout with a top-ounce
We are haughtily proud,
Divine is eternally supreme
His work never stops, and
His weaving is always wise,
But we must remember that
We are an essential portion of it.

Let us embrace each day
As a raw opportunity to weave
A Halcyon design
With dedication and patience
We can grow the warp and woof
Over that majestic loom
Until we blossom, akin to flowers.

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Valsa George January 24, 2024 at 8:28 PM Beautiful way of looking at life and the opportunities it offers each day. All of us can have different view points. But they shouldn't clash, but go into the making of a beautiful tapestry like warp and woof. "Let us embrace each day As a raw opportunity to weave A Halcyon design With dedication and patience We can grow the warp and woof Over that majestic loom Until we blossom, akin to flowers." Beautiful lines. Love this concluding part that sums up the essence of the poem.

Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2024 at 11:53 AM I harness the strand in crimson Widening warp and woof Over that magnificent loom… Sadness for their plight emerged In bows and flowery swags…lovely metaphors.

Silent One January 23, 2024 at 10:06 AM Your poem skilfully explores the theme of life's intricate design, likening it to the artistry of weaving and emphasizing the divine presence in this cosmic tapestry. The use of phrases like "triumphant variously savour" and "godly guile" suggests a celebration of diverse perspectives and divine wisdom...

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2024 at 9:14 AM - How beautifully written... (as always)... I admire your wonderful weavings, Las :) - hugs

Ink Empress January 23, 2024 at 8:03 AM Ah dr sotto, as always the wisdom that flows in your heart can be seen through your exquisite and wise write that delivers such profound reminders in the most poetic manner! I love the flow of your metaphors and descriptive diction and how youve said so much in such a creative manner especially “ Let us embrace each day As a raw opportunity to weave A Halcyon design“ i agree! And i hope this would inspire so many to do so the same. So uplifting and so encouraging are your words! Pleasure reading

Sara Kendrick January 23, 2024 at 7:25 AM Yes, our lives are like woven fabric or more like an embroidery piece with the finished product facing outward, but the backside is what our life looks like when we see all that we have been through. Enjoyed reading your work especially the last stanza. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Vijay Pandit January 23, 2024 at 6:37 AM So much wisdom you convey throughout, my friend. Voice of your poem illuminates and enlightens.

Hiya Sharma January 23, 2024 at 4:47 AM Oh my, this is such an inspiring and wise write dear Sotto.. It's always such a wonderful experience to read your profound philosophical words & this one goes to the complexities of life, yet reminding us to blossom akin those fragranced flowers.. All of us can have different viewpoints and perspectives, but what binds us all is the light of Almighty.. Also, life is a vast journey of exploration and self-discovery, we must keep weaving new patterns and embrace how we evolve with time..so amazing Hiya Sharma January 23, 2024 at 4:47 AM A brilliant poem with artistic wordplay, metaphors and glorious vocabulary, I absolutely enjoyed reading this.. A fav for me, keep writing and shining always :)

Karen Jones January 22, 2024 at 9:56 PM Superior word choice and great alliteration reigned in by a few wisdom pearls like these lines Divine is eternally supreme His work never stops, and His weaving is always wise, But we must remember that We are an essential portion of it. Great job Sotto Poet !