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Tapestry of Life

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January 22, 2024 ____________________________________ Divergent viewpoints can arise Whilst triumphant variously savor Glorious tune of achievement, Gain glory as godly guile Whilst booming into spring blooms In fervor of zeal, vow faithfully God bestows on them a swish tree With a bountiful harvest Its span is boundless Akin to an everlasting ring, However, clocks tick down Daily weavings of divine honor. Amidst lustrous obelisk Unbeknown overall aesthetic Sprawled across stars haze My cosmic frame oozes to apex I harness the strand in crimson Widening warp and woof Over that magnificent loom Queries seldom yield effectiveness, Sadness for their plight emerged In bows and flowery swags We ought to remember Fetching a fresh format forward Divine devotion developed. We could detect tangles and flaws Fairness shares justice and equity The quest implies grace and faith, A gorgeous layout with a top-ounce We are haughtily proud, Divine is eternally supreme His work never stops, and His weaving is always wise, But we must remember that We are an essential portion of it. Let us embrace each day As a raw opportunity to weave A Halcyon design With dedication and patience We can grow the warp and woof Over that majestic loom Until we blossom, akin to flowers.

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Valsa George

Date: 1/24/2024 8:28:00 PM

Beautiful way of looking at life and the opportunities it offers each day. All of us can have different view points. But they shouldn't clash, but go into the making of a beautiful tapestry like warp and woof. "Let us embrace each day As a raw opportunity to weave A Halcyon design With dedication and patience We can grow the warp and woof Over that majestic loom Until we blossom, akin to flowers." Beautiful lines. Love this concluding part that sums up the essence of the poem.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/23/2024 11:53:00 AM

I harness the strand in crimson Widening warp and woof Over that magnificent loom… Sadness for their plight emerged In bows and flowery swags…lovely metaphors.

Silent One

Date: 1/23/2024 10:06:00 AM

Your poem skilfully explores the theme of life's intricate design, likening it to the artistry of weaving and emphasizing the divine presence in this cosmic tapestry. The use of phrases like "triumphant variously savour" and "godly guile" suggests a celebration of diverse perspectives and divine wisdom...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/23/2024 9:14:00 AM

- How beautifully written... (as always)... I admire your wonderful weavings, Las :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 1/23/2024 8:03:00 AM

Ah dr sotto, as always the wisdom that flows in your heart can be seen through your exquisite and wise write that delivers such profound reminders in the most poetic manner! I love the flow of your metaphors and descriptive diction and how youve said so much in such a creative manner especially “ Let us embrace each day As a raw opportunity to weave A Halcyon design“ i agree! And i hope this would inspire so many to do so the same. So uplifting and so encouraging are your words! Pleasure reading

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2024 7:25:00 AM

Yes, our lives are like woven fabric or more like an embroidery piece with the finished product facing outward, but the backside is what our life looks like when we see all that we have been through. Enjoyed reading your work especially the last stanza. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/23/2024 6:37:00 AM

So much wisdom you convey throughout, my friend. Voice of your poem illuminates and enlightens.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/23/2024 5:42:00 AM

I appreciate the philosophical nature of your poem, dear Sotto--a philosophy that speaks to tolerance of differences, the flow of time, life's quest for justice and equity, life's journeys, and embellishing life along the way. Truly a remarkable creation. Your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/23/2024 4:47:00 AM

Oh my, this is such an inspiring and wise write dear Sotto.. It's always such a wonderful experience to read your profound philosophical words & this one goes to the complexities of life, yet reminding us to blossom akin those fragranced flowers.. All of us can have different viewpoints and perspectives, but what binds us all is the light of Almighty.. Also, life is a vast journey of exploration and self-discovery, we must keep weaving new patterns and embrace how we evolve with time..so amazing

Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/23/2024 4:47:00 AM

A brilliant poem with artistic wordplay, metaphors and glorious vocabulary, I absolutely enjoyed reading this.. A fav for me, keep writing and shining always :)

Karen Jones

Date: 1/22/2024 9:56:00 PM

Superior word choice and great alliteration reigned in by a few wisdom pearls like these lines Divine is eternally supreme His work never stops, and His weaving is always wise, But we must remember that We are an essential portion of it. Great job Sotto Poet !