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Sometimes I wake, at least believing I have, but find that I'm wandering about, perhaps dreaming while walking in a mist, through empty halls where moonlight doesn't stream through windows on walls. I'm alone in lush jungles of canopied forests, and bathing in pools behind waterfalls. It's a strange realm of a juxtaposing existence where my words and thoughts mingle, trying to blend like slow-running river currents, flowing into roiling tides of ocean waves. It's the place where lost love lingers and grief echoes its mourning call trying in vain to heal in silence and sobs are stifled throes of sorrow as their cries are only heard by me as they ricochet through my mind's tunnels. In my poetry these corridors exist— these hollow spaces and empty places I create in journeys between sadness and joy, hope and heartbreak, life and death and where with each breath I take holds gasping ghosts of lost loves as they hover, unheard but felt in the ruins of what once was a lamplit rendezvous lieu, now withered and cold, a cavern of darkness. There's stark sadness some would label madness found in dreams that leave my body and soul aching and craving to come awake. Whether I wander in a blossoming garden in these reveries, remembering candlelight nights of passionate kisses within love's arms— they're only a worn tapestry of broken threads from the many textured fabrics of my life. Some became tangled and some unraveled, others frayed and were pulled apart that had to be stitched in the wounded places with a patchwork of bloodied cloths to cover the scars that form crossroads across my heart. More often the dreams that find me in slumber now take me to happier places where smiling faces surround me and ease the pains I've borne. Though time in those spaces flows too quickly, like grains of hourglass sands sifting and shifting like dunes formed by errant Zepher winds. Now, as I walk in the warmth of sunlight's rays, erased are the hovering ghostly shadows. From those ruins where life was lived, I'm drifting past the perished caverns from my yesteryears.

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Date: 6/4/2025 12:58:00 PM
The possibility to live another life within our dreams, except it would be for all eternity with a menu of dream titles to choose from, I think it's somewhere we would all love to live, to make our nightly dreams our realities, I seem to say this about all your poems but you really do posses the most wonderful gift, ever considered trying to write an average poem? Lol Danny
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Date: 6/4/2025 1:09:00 PM
Average is what I'd call my poetry, Danny. lol but that was a cute compliment, so thank you. Dreams that come with a menu... how thought provoking. I fear many of us would never want to wake! Seriously, thank you for being supportive and encouraging.
Date: 6/4/2025 2:46:00 AM
How touching and soulful is this poem dear linnersz, i love the picture youv used and how youv phrased lines and the metaphors and the depth of emotions youv expressed, here leaves a poetic impression one that is achingly sweet! I love the lines “ where my words and thoughts mingle, trying to blend like slow-running river currents, flowing into roiling tides of ocean waves.” what an exquisite way to describe thoughts and what runs through your consciousness. You delivered another eloquent and heartfelt poem that resonates! Pleasure reading you! Sending you light
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Date: 6/4/2025 3:05:00 AM
I tend to get a titch emotional when I write about life and its ups and downs. Thanks ever so much for enjoying my poetry and for delving deeply enough to see me in my lines, Ink. Hugs for your support and light.
Date: 6/3/2025 7:16:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your dreams. I'm glad now your mostly having sunnier ones, rather than the dark, ghostly ones.
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Date: 6/4/2025 3:03:00 AM
Thank you so very much, David.
Date: 6/3/2025 6:21:00 PM
Lin, sounds like you're looking at many things that occurred in the past and putting them in perspective. I really like this poem because I can relate to the entire process of adjusting my thoughts to the point where anything that happened back then is merely a lesson of some kind. What may have been bad at the time is over and done with, and now we can live in the sunlight and warmth of the present. This is an earth shattering concept, and those of us who get to this point in life are so lucky indeed. To me, it's the basis of being in a euphoric glow. Hope you are sensing that too for yourself. Smiles!!
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Date: 6/4/2025 3:02:00 AM
All of life's experiences should serve as lessons to be learned. Not everyone has the fortunate culmination of them as offering a euphoric glow, but I'm still hoping the sun continues to shine on me. I am totally enjoying my life. Thanks so much for your encouragement, Duke.
Date: 6/3/2025 4:23:00 PM
Fantastic write. Great rhythm and flow. Wonderful imagery. Nice piece of free verse. Some believe that life is a dream.
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Date: 6/3/2025 4:41:00 PM
Hi, Frank and thank you ever so much reading me and leaving such a complimentary review.
Date: 6/3/2025 3:52:00 PM
Lovers leave the deepest scars, from the breadth and depth of shared passions that seem unreal, though they are more real and more intensely unsettling to the soul, my first thoughts after reading your poem, Lin...
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Date: 6/3/2025 4:03:00 PM
Frederic, when it comes to poetry about romance your thoughts are always on the right path. Thank you for your thoughts on my verses. I’m always grateful for your time.
Date: 6/3/2025 2:31:00 PM
What a wonderful title, Lin, that you spin out through each stanza of your wonderfully crafted poem that expresses the threads of that place between dreams and dawn, visions and reality - that shadowy place we may or may not remember when we wake. So impressive. Thank you for this poetic gift. Blessings!
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Date: 6/3/2025 2:43:00 PM
Hi, Sam and I'm always gratified with my writes by your insightful comments. The gift to me is many times over from friends who garner what I'm trying to say in my poetry. Thank you ever so much.
Date: 6/3/2025 1:08:00 PM
You’re either in that place between waking and dreaming Lin, or perhaps derailing your dreams after waking up, it’s really difficult to pen from such a place for it’s such a fleeting surreal experience, nonetheless you’ve written a beautiful piece of free verse here capturing that torn dimension only ever heard by the individual, a poignant and more importantly a human poem, cheers David
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Date: 6/3/2025 2:41:00 PM
I wrote this while wide awake, although it may have been drawn from recesses of those dark dimensions, the caverns of lost loves where ghosts hover. From wherever it was born, it's one of those 'oomph there it is' writes that seemed to give life to itself. Thank you, David, for always comprehending my intentions in each line as well as between them, and recognizing my writes are always my own and not one as many 'poets' are prone to claim... AI as their own.
Date: 6/3/2025 12:56:00 PM
Dearest Lin, Oh, each line a gentle ache, a testament to survival and the beauty found in brokenness. Such longing and resilience in every image, from moonlit halls to sunlit gardens. I truly feel the vulnerable corridors of your heart. Frayed threads can be woven into something radiant and oh, so human. Wonderful Lin! Blessings, My Dear Lin, Daniel
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Date: 6/3/2025 1:04:00 PM
Sunlight's warmth can be a healing balm for many ailments, Daniel and so are comments like yours that salve the places where sutures were needed. You see the beauty in the fragility of a human heart, and I am grateful as ever for your tender handling of mine in your remarks. Thank you.

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