TAPESTRY

do not hesitate 
to make your life's tapestry
the blink of God's eye 
ends our sOwing time quickly -
use authentic shades stitched strong

lifetimetanka

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Keith Bickerstaffe

December 31, 2015 at 3:54 AM

An excellent TANKA my dear! in 57577 form with wonderful grammatical flow. Well done indeed! Best wishes, Keith

CayCay Godwin

December 31, 2015 at 4:18 AM

Thank you, Keith ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

December 20, 2015 at 8:24 PM

this one isn't judged yet,is it? Still love it.

Eileen Manassian

December 18, 2015 at 11:35 PM

Fantastic, Caycay. What a wonderful message. Yes...it puts things in the right perspective, dear. Hugs

CayCay Godwin

December 19, 2015 at 3:48 PM

So glad you visited and found poems you enjoyed. Thank you for the lovely comments ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

December 18, 2015 at 8:43 AM

this is such a wonderful message, CayCay. I am here to say hello and I sure hope to get an email from you whenever you feel up to it. HUGS!

CayCay Godwin

December 18, 2015 at 10:42 PM

Thank you, Andrea ... CayCay

Maurice Yvonne

December 13, 2015 at 11:39 AM

Wonderfully expressed a beautiful poem in the tanka form. A great read, thank you!

CayCay Godwin

December 18, 2015 at 10:43 PM

Maurice - I am delighted that you enjoyed reading the poem, thank you for telling me ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux

December 13, 2015 at 10:30 AM

I like you interpretation of the theme Cay Cay. Good luck in the contest.

CayCay Godwin

December 18, 2015 at 10:43 PM

I'm thanking you!

Paul Callus

December 13, 2015 at 8:54 AM

We have to make good use of the time afforded us on earth. You pass a message with poetic words, CayCay! Lovely. ~ Regards // paul

CayCay Godwin

December 18, 2015 at 10:44 PM

Thank you so much, Paul - always a pleasure finding you and reading you ... CayCay

Nette Onclaud

December 12, 2015 at 1:53 AM

life is how you create it with fullness despite the short time given to us, cay... you fascinate!..huggs

CayCay Godwin

December 18, 2015 at 10:44 PM

Thank you, dear heart - I appreciate you ... CayCay

Lin Lane

December 11, 2015 at 9:11 PM

I've never written a tanka, but I will certainly try. The message in this one offers great advice with lovely words.

CayCay Godwin

December 18, 2015 at 10:45 PM

Thank you, Lin - I appreciate your comments ... CayCay

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