Nette Onclaud Poet Dodoitsu

Tantric

the touch of his evening sky

   lingers on my fluid mouth

     exploring tantric kisses…

       without need for words



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Dr. Ram Mehta's Dodoitsu Contest
by nette onclaud
2/13/2015

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Phil Capitano April 22, 2017 at 11:49 AM Really beautiful and sensuous nette, great use of the form.

Shane Cooper February 16, 2015 at 3:31 PM Such wonderful use of language in these Dodoitsu, it is one of my favourite forms so much can be expressed in so few words. Your imagry is brilliant, a great write. Good luck in the comp. I think it is a winner. love Shane xxx

Barbara Gorelick February 15, 2015 at 2:29 AM Lovely nette..not sure but I think he wanted 2 verses for the contest. wouldnt want you to miss out if thats the case. BG

Rhoma Em February 14, 2015 at 1:33 PM Breathtaking scene of romance which is heightened by hints of sensuality. Well worded and a distinct kind of poetry, Nette. The last line sweetens the whole mood of this fine poem.

Emile Pinet February 14, 2015 at 1:09 PM Your word choice is good and the message sent is strong, sensual and provocative. Emile. #7

Andrea Dietrich February 14, 2015 at 11:26 AM this is REALLY GOOD. A chart topper and sensuous beauty, Nette.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2015 at 11:24 AM - Beautiful with a few words - Good luck in the contest - Sweet Valentines day, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poesy Relish February 14, 2015 at 10:59 AM tantric kisses.. great expression Nette.. like like... wish you a happy valentines day and a great weekend... hugs,nad!

Kp Nunez February 14, 2015 at 9:08 AM Oh how lovely...this is one lovely story captured in just a few words...Super 7 and a fav! Sweet Valentine's this rainy night, Nette. :D Kim

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 14, 2015 at 7:43 AM Tantric Kisses wow great experience..sensual...blissful..Love nette. Wish you a Happy Valentine's Day. Always & Forever...rajat

Jan Allison February 14, 2015 at 6:19 AM Oh beautiful Nette good luck with this little gem:-) Hugs jan xx