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Tantalizing Love

Tantalizing love, how long I’ve known you. How often I’ve succumbed to you, but how often I’ve resisted too - while wanting you so badly. I’ll never tire of you, nor do I want to, for you’ve been a part of my greatest times. I have had to learn to control myself when you are around. I’m not the only one who loves you more than I should. You are so good when you are bad! Oh, to breathe your scent and hold you to my lips! Delicious food, I adore you. WRitten 9/19/14 for the Double reverse Etheree contest of Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/4/2014 2:50:00 PM
Really tantalizing,Andrea....Nice write..Congrats on your superb win...
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Date: 10/4/2014 6:13:00 AM
Congrats on your top placing in Shadow's contest! Food sure makes us fall into temptation, especially if it's forbidden! // paul
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Date: 10/4/2014 4:07:00 AM
Tantalising indeed, if only we could resist. Congratulations on your win with this perfect work.
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Date: 10/4/2014 1:50:00 AM
Lovely write on love, Andrea. congreats
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Date: 10/4/2014 12:42:00 AM
tantalizing, indeed! Conratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 10/3/2014 9:50:00 PM
romantic, somewhat sensual - only to find out it's animal, vegetable and/or mineral instead of "male". Congrats on first place, a bait and switch of perfection.
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Date: 10/3/2014 8:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 10/3/2014 8:46:00 PM
Oh I was getting so worried. Glad it is only food that you are succumbing to. Great win, Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/3/2014 7:52:00 PM
Loved this the first time I read it, Andrea...we are kindred tummies, oh, I mean hearts. lol Congratulations.
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Date: 10/3/2014 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your high ranking win.
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Date: 10/3/2014 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Such a cute end.
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Date: 10/3/2014 6:09:00 PM
superb Andrea your poem has a ring to it that speaks in volumes congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs
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Date: 10/3/2014 5:54:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan/Stan xxxx
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Date: 9/26/2014 8:04:00 AM
Glad to see I'm not the only one who thinks more about forbidden foods than we should!
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Date: 9/25/2014 8:07:00 PM
Nice to see this on the winning list... Linda
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Date: 9/25/2014 2:51:00 AM
Very wonderful write Andrea! And so lovely on love! Congrats on ur top place win!
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Date: 9/24/2014 4:03:00 PM
Classic!..Wonderful piece,Andrea..Congrats on your well deserved win...Kudos!...
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Date: 9/24/2014 3:50:00 PM
Congrats Andrea...I don't think this will be the last time we see this high upon the podium...hugs Tim
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Date: 9/24/2014 12:18:00 PM
By the way I did well too. I got an HM. You know that is where you didn't really win anything but unlike the people who were not mentioned everybody knows you struck out. I came very close though to placing I was just slightly squeezed out by another poem written by pen name "The Illiterate Poet"
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2014 3:22:00 PM
what a great description for HM. It is kinda bad when you think about it. The ones who did terrible in the contest, nobody will ever know! I think a nicer way to say it is "not good enough in the judge's opinion." I have seen SO many judges whose HM's were MY personal favorites in the whole contest . It just makes you realize how very subjective this art called poetry can be!
Date: 9/24/2014 12:11:00 PM
People always wonder what my real name is. Having read this perfectly crafted talent infused Etheree I think it is time I reveal my name. First name Delicious and yes you guessed it last name Food. You should meet my younger brother the bachelor. His first name is Frozen, which works out well since the Microwave is the only stove he has ever used.CONGRATULATIONS on your massive second place win.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2014 3:20:00 PM
you don't want to be delicious food because I'd gobble you right up and you would disappear from our midst. hahaha
Date: 9/24/2014 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win with this delicious poem.
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Date: 9/24/2014 9:18:00 AM
Very tasty entry on the theme menu.
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Date: 9/24/2014 7:40:00 AM
Andrea A humorous and fun write because almost everyone has a love addiction to some sort of food. Thank you for the sweet comment on my One Little Kiss poem.
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Date: 9/24/2014 4:55:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2014 10:06:00 PM
Hi Andrea, you never reply to my comments. Are you starting to, be... LOL... Anywas, here we go! Andrea, thank you for commenting my comment, that was very nice of you. Love Linda
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