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Tanka X

Springtime forgotten Clouds release winter memories While gale force winds Uproot sunshine desires Like shallow rooted trees

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/19/2021 1:44:00 PM
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- Spring and summer are my favorite time, Scott :) - A great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/17/2017 2:03:00 PM
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Hello Scott. Your entry is timely as Winter is not over yet. Perhaps more snow tomorrow night. Your words are well executed with much imagery. Well done
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/20/2017 8:01:00 AM
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A clever write.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/17/2016 7:29:00 PM
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that was a great story about your mother in law. I would SUCK at a tonal language. Could never get it with guitar. How would I ever get it with Chinese?
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2016 8:34:00 AM
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This one made me shiver!
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2016 1:07:00 AM
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A wonderful tanka my dear Sir Scott! Thanks a lot for sharing and for your wonderful feedback on my haibun. So much appreciated. More blessings and power! Hugs!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/8/2016 7:09:00 PM
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this is wonderful and it kind of goes along with what is happening on the east coast!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/6/2016 8:45:00 PM
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Lovely, Scott. I really liked the line....uproot sunshine desires. Superb.
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 10/3/2016 1:36:00 PM
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Beautiful and deep, Scott... glad to read your top tanka. Linda
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/3/2016 10:32:00 AM
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Phantasmagoric writing! Enjoyed enormously! I adored it dear, Scott! A seven!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/3/2016 8:12:00 AM
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This piece is infused with wisdom. Excellet my friend.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/3/2016 5:43:00 AM
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Excellent Tanka. Enjoyed reading it.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/1/2016 11:46:00 AM
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Terrific Tanka Scott...I would rather have the Spring
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/29/2016 6:23:00 PM
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I will grow wings toward your land today... liked it a lot.... Cheers...
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