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Tanka X

Springtime forgotten
Clouds release winter memories
While gale force winds
Uproot sunshine desires
Like shallow rooted trees

springwintertanka

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Anne-Lise Andresen

July 19, 2021 at 1:44 PM

- Spring and summer are my favorite time, Scott :) - A great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci

March 17, 2017 at 2:03 PM

Hello Scott. Your entry is timely as Winter is not over yet. Perhaps more snow tomorrow night. Your words are well executed with much imagery. Well done

Richard Lamoureux

February 20, 2017 at 8:01 AM

A clever write.

Andrea Dietrich

November 17, 2016 at 7:29 PM

that was a great story about your mother in law. I would SUCK at a tonal language. Could never get it with guitar. How would I ever get it with Chinese?

Richard Lamoureux

October 19, 2016 at 8:34 AM

This one made me shiver!

Len Gasun

October 18, 2016 at 1:07 AM

A wonderful tanka my dear Sir Scott! Thanks a lot for sharing and for your wonderful feedback on my haibun. So much appreciated. More blessings and power! Hugs!