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Tanka-

as we walked the beach
the pink skies softened the tide
and smoothed lines in our faces....

your hand reached out to mine
to touch a girl you once knew


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4/2/15

lovemarriagenaturetanka

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Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2015 at 2:34 PM

Carrie Awesome win...Linda

Skat A

April 18, 2015 at 12:15 PM

Carrie:) Congratulations, on your awesome Tanka win. SKAT

Edward Ebbs

April 11, 2015 at 8:24 AM

Returning to say congrats, Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

April 9, 2015 at 11:58 PM

this was my favorite in the whole contest. Congrats on a top win.

James Fraser

April 9, 2015 at 1:47 PM

Love the emotions that resonate from within your Tanka Carrie, very nice indeed, hugs, James :)

Emmanuel Brian Oule

April 8, 2015 at 11:45 PM

Very nice, i loved the entire pictures painted in this poem, Nice love poem Congs from Bryan

Tammy Reams

April 7, 2015 at 8:14 PM

Congrats on your Tanka. Beautiful write!

Faye Gibson

April 7, 2015 at 5:56 PM

Hi, Carrie...really, really love this one, as I always love your writing. So beautiful with a touch of nostalgic sadness. Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

April 7, 2015 at 4:55 PM

Congrats!! I knew it was a winner..Sara

Eve Roper

April 7, 2015 at 4:39 PM

Carrie, congratulations on this descriptive tanka win and a 7. Blessings

John Lawless

April 7, 2015 at 4:15 PM

Carrie, I think I've been there. congrats on a well deserved placement with this sweetly poignant tanka

Sandra Haight

April 7, 2015 at 3:52 PM

Carrie, congratulations on your podium win for your lovely Tanka. I really felt the emotion in your words of the years gone by in a loving relationship. Tanka