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Tanka 4 - Treasure of My Soul

Tanka 4 – Treasure of My Soul
	
	dampness of your skin
	wet hair dripping down your back
	glancing toward me
	one small laugh escapes your lips
	a deep treasure of my soul
	
	
	For Gail Angel Doyle’s “Treasures of your soul” contest

Copyright © Jack Jordan | Year Posted 2013

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Debbie Duncan Date: 8/19/2013 5:18:00 PM Oh, I love this Jack,,,, kinda reminds me of my Sweet Ecstasy ;} you have a great day . Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 8/19/2013 5:32:00 PM It has been a good day. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem... Jack

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 8/4/2013 7:25:00 PM Hi Jack; This is short, good. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest..... Lucilla Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 8/19/2013 5:32:00 PM Thanks, Lucilla, but the contest didn't happen. I'm not sure why... Jack

Karen Anglesey Date: 7/31/2013 6:36:00 AM Every line a treasured meaning. Beautiful in this poetry form. Delicious :) Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 7/31/2013 7:43:00 AM Thank you, Karen. I appreciate the very nice compliment... Jack

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/29/2013 12:31:00 PM wellll, you said it so richly in just a few words, jack...simple delights are treasures, and this is a treasure of a piece!..:) huggs Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 7/29/2013 1:56:00 PM Thank you,Nette. Very kind comments... Jack

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/27/2013 9:09:00 AM Ahhh!! Romantic..Sara Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 7/27/2013 11:12:00 AM Thank you for the comment, Sara... Jack

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/27/2013 6:42:00 AM This is so romantic and sexy. I have the picture flickering on my mind. Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 7/27/2013 8:18:00 AM Mine too. If it ever actually happened to me, It was long ago. Thanks for the comment, Richard... Jack

Donna Jones Date: 7/26/2013 1:44:00 PM Jack I can hear and feel the moment!!!! CAPTURED!! Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 7/26/2013 2:52:00 PM Thanks for the compliment. I'm glad you liked it... Jack

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/25/2013 11:40:00 PM This must be the new contest of Gail's? Wow, you nailed it!!! Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 7/26/2013 8:51:00 AM Thanks! Tanka are difficult for me. Maybe I just don't have 31syllables in me all the time... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/25/2013 6:18:00 AM - Jack, this is beautiful!! - Cross my fingers and hope it will win the contest!! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 7/25/2013 6:48:00 AM Thanks, Anne Lise, for the good wishes... Jack

Poet Tacito Date: 7/24/2013 5:18:00 PM Yes! The simple pleasures of it all! I love a lady with the wet hair look. Awesome! Login to Reply Jack Jordan Date: 7/24/2013 5:44:00 PM Thanks, Drake. Simple pleasures indeed... Jack