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Tanka 04, No Title Fortanka - Sub: Winter

Lightning blinds minds eyes. Thunder defens my lone heart Static charged my pride. Pouring rain drenched my sorrow Cold dark winter dampens love.

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Date: 7/11/2014 7:46:00 AM
Oh I love this, what images!
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Sam Raj
Date: 7/12/2014 2:08:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, For the visit, I like surprises. That's the beauty of tanka. TC :-)

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