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tanka1

languid afternoon cottonball clouds drift across an expansive sky creating elaborate patterns for painters to interpret

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/26/2019 5:44:00 AM
thank you Rituko!!
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Rituko Shindo
Date: 11/27/2019 6:40:00 AM
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Date: 11/26/2019 4:47:00 AM
It was a gloomy afternoon, but while you were watching the clouds in the sky, you became an artistic sensation. I like your sensibility.
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Date: 8/10/2010 11:48:00 PM
Nicely done!
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Date: 8/8/2010 10:02:00 PM
Carol,this is just stunning. I hope you keep writing and enter some of the contests..you will do well..BG
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Date: 6/17/2010 3:26:00 PM
Very creative write! love Simone
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Date: 6/15/2010 4:49:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Carol. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 4:44:00 PM
Great desciptive write with excellent metaphoric language...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/14/2010 2:50:00 PM
Beautiful choice of words, great imagery, loved the last line- it tends to be all we can do - interpret nature with the model in which our brain creates, but one cannot not negate the aethetic beauty that whirls around us, that you encapsulated brilliantly just with these few words, thanks for this. Regards, Gavin.
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