Tango Serenade

Her red dress
Flowing in the air
Like flames
It burns,
Her wide hazel eyes
Sharply looks,
Her Brown tall curls
Dance
Whenever she turns around
and makes a loud sound
with her high healed black sandals,
Her thick red lips
softly sings.


He passionately plays his violin,
His stick goes back and forth
on its strings,
His arm quickly moves,
His deep black eyes
directly stares at her;
tracing every movement
waiting every reaction.


She feels she wants more,
She can move more,
dance more,
He provides her with energy;
His eyes, his smile,
His music controles
every movement she makes,
every sound she utters.


His stick,
His magnetic force,
His creative powers
invites her to life
He is a magician!


She can dance forever,
look at his face forever,
hear his music forever,
love him forever.

Now,

He owns the world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mouwahed Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 9:20 AM
I love it ! I love it ! I love it ! I love it ! I love it ! I love it ! hhhhhhhhhhhh thank you !! You're in love Omneya : I envie you :) cuz some people can't !!
Kamal Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 4:12 AM
heyyyy glad you like the poem! and btw when a poet write about love it doesnt mean she is in love :D it means she can imagine well what it should be like :) have a good week! Omneya
Tsiluma Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 8:08 AM
I love it! Love how you've started it from her point of view, then his, then both of them together. They both show the passion in what they do. And the consequence of the actions plays out well in the end with the man feeling victorious. Very nice Omneya!
Kamal Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Vicky thank you for your amazing analysis for the poem! you made me see the poem differently in a way I didn't think of before! Will always wait your opinion on my new writings! Love, Omneya
Neels Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Wow, love the rhythm and the imagery in this gem Omneya ;) you got me smiling especially love your ending!
Kamal Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Hey Wilma, Thanks alot for your lovely comment! Have a great week end! Omneya
Poet Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 7:39 AM
Ohh...wonderful!!Love this!
Kamal Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Thanks Kash so glad you like it! have a good week end! Omneya
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 5:22 AM
It sounds like music to my ears Omneya!! Gorgeous poem. - Love it !!! Have a wonderful day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Kamal Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Thanks Anne for your amazing support! Have a good week end Love, Omneya..
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