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Tango (Fibonacci)

TANGO (Fibonacci) He She Table Bold Spanish music Flask of vintage wine Two glasses She so dark So beautiful The rhythm? Maddening! A Tango by Albeniz Fire in her eyes Lips promising Young love Espana!

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Royal Trevino

Date: 4/18/2010 8:26:00 AM

she sounds attractive, he must be crazy for her

Date: 4/15/2010 5:38:00 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Oh, that young love. Nice use of this challenging form. Keep on writing! Karen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/14/2010 10:26:00 PM

I have made it my favourite

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/14/2010 10:24:00 PM

A fine romantic surroundings you have created. I enjoyed it

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/14/2010 4:12:00 PM

I want to dance the Tango,the wild erotic Tango..and Flamenco,the Rumba,What about the Cacca?;)..I have a poem about all kind of dancing ,the most favorite poem to my heart,and you rekindled its memory..lovely poem,,going to my favs..Charma

Amy Thompson

Date: 4/14/2010 4:08:00 PM

Dear Daver, while I was born in Estonia, my family had to flee from communist domination, and after 7 years in Sweden settled in Canada. Even though I currently live in Mexico, my email is still riisna@yahoo.ca The ca stands for Canada. I look forward to hearing from you and to discussing the various artists in the music world. I like a lot of semi-classical music, too, but I’m ignorant about modern music and musicians who came after Elvis Presley. I’m old fashioned. Love, Amy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2010 2:07:00 PM

Oh, I love ESPANA!! Cool tango, DAver. About the rock poem, it was based on the picture for Raul(?)'s contest. It is an archway in a desert with stars of night behind it. Have you been to Spain? I found out you have met my dear friend Amy!! LUv, Andrea ps. when are you posting the Lost poem?

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/14/2010 12:22:00 PM

very nice I'm putting on my dancing shoes nice write loved it faleshia

Amy Thompson

Date: 4/14/2010 12:02:00 PM

Dear Daver, Yes, music is international but as manager of three Mensa groups, I get the feeling that I’m manager of a cultural back water. People hardly ever discuss good music and all they seem to know about is rock or country and western. I suppose it’s culture of a sort but it’s not the kind I’m used to or like. The violin is my next favourite instrument, the human voice being the first. Love, Amy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2010 11:58:00 AM

Sounds like the most beautiful people in the ballroom that night. Nice one Mr. Daver

Amy Thompson

Date: 4/14/2010 11:54:00 AM

Dear Daver, I’m 74, and my parents are dead. My father was actually a lawyer-politician-writer, and the violin was a hobby, although he gave recitals when he was young. I grew up in a home with good music. I play the piano myself, but I’m not very good anymore. My email is riisna@yahoo.ca, and I would like to keep in touch with you. I might add that this is the first time that I have said that to anybody on internet. Love, Amy

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/14/2010 10:57:00 AM

sounds romantic, I am not a fiddler, I did take some lessons when I was a child, but never was coordinated enough to put it all together. I wish I had tried harder. I love to hear a fiddle play and it is so beautiful. Do you play?

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/14/2010 10:12:00 AM

Care to dance my friend? We could show those young sprouts a thing or 2..Nice one. BG

Amy Thompson

Date: 4/14/2010 8:58:00 AM

P.S. Could you please tell me where you live, Daver? I was born in Estonia, one of the Baltic states, and I have a feeling that you may also be European. Love, Amy

Amy Thompson

Date: 4/14/2010 8:54:00 AM

Dear Daver, I’m absolutely delighted to run into you! My mother was a concert pianist and my father played the violin. I just finished your poem Tango (Fibonacci) and I see that you mention another favourite of mine, the Albeniz Tango. You bring back so many beautiful memories of musicians I have known who really knew what beautiful music could do. Thank you for a special moment in my day. I have both the Tango and Monte’s czardas on tape together with many other favourites. Love, Amy