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Tango

tango I see her sway in a tango young lithe a brief moment without a care alone beneath palms of night far off shore lights answer in step a dreamy dip and bow the sky reflects the glow reaching for her hands that flutter as moths music is in her head music only she knows slipstreaming across gulfs of misery the strings it attaches pull her hips like a pendulum's sway slow arcs of flame burn her pale skin a stare of warm melted caress brushes the face of the unseen purple blossoms trail from her hair leda pleases herself in the dark dancing passion to a clouded moon.

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Date: 9/20/2017 2:05:00 PM
Agree with Maureen -Steamy. The dancing partner is unmentioned here and shining in his absence
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/20/2017 6:02:00 PM
Sorry to disappoint Jannie, no suitor invisible or otherwise. Leda dances for herself to embrace the world.
Date: 9/19/2017 7:27:00 PM
Fun fact about me: I have a thing called musical ear syndrome (without hearing loss), not terribly rare but an oddity nonetheless. I spend a lot of time alone and nature revives me. When the music only I can hear, begins, sometimes I dance alone in nature, raising my face to the sun in gratitude. This piece took me to those moments. Well done x
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/19/2017 9:45:00 PM
I too dance alone especially in the Spring when the geese trumpet their way from the south. I stand on my porch in bare feet and greet them as I am sure many women have done over time.
Date: 9/19/2017 10:49:00 AM
Gorgeous.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/19/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Dale welcome to my place.
Date: 9/18/2017 7:10:00 PM
Steamy!
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