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Tangled Wings

Our love entwines as your arms open wide, open for your love to come enter into me. Sweeping me oh so gently off of my feet, clearing all of the imperfections that live in me. Overwhelming me ever so swiftly, capable to move me without any delay. Just when I began to lose my faith you came and brought it back to me. Teaching me only fidelity, showing me nothing but true loyalty. Extensively felicity no more no less, your fictitiously tangled wings lifted me liberation gifted me freely. My soul delicately sings as your tangled wings leads me unconditionally. Love exceeds no boundaries, no restrictions or conditions simply guided benediction. Your love shall never let me fall your spirit mysteriously carries me off. You were my eyes when I could not see, spiritually you taught me to be strong keeping faith I shall never go wrong. Holding on tightly I became motionless in spite of the increasing flight. You saw something in me that I have yet could not see, you saw the sorrow and all my source of grief. Your love gave me strength as a chain reaction leadership. Tangled wings of attachment clinging and to inclined to your dependence, as my heart clinches an embraces our tangled wings intentions. I relinquish all of my love for you; I am your personal pendant. Intimate intentional love that soar so high I have yet to begin to touch the sky. We became immortality and everlasting, forever loving impossible to be neither unattainable nor unbelievable. Imaginary forever everlasting…Tangled wings.

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Date: 5/18/2012 1:07:00 PM
Beautiful..had me going on this one.!! love is soo beautiful when you have it.
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 5/18/2012 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Pace. :)
Date: 1/9/2012 11:53:00 PM
this was such an enigmatic work...wow ! My dear beautiful friend ...keep writing like this ...
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 1/19/2012 12:03:00 PM
thank you Red Fiery :0)
Date: 1/7/2012 2:56:00 PM
Lovely poem. I loved the line, "as my heart clinches and embraces our tangled wings intention."
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 1/19/2012 12:02:00 PM
im so happy you enjoyed it :0) thank you for your comment.
Date: 1/4/2012 10:54:00 PM
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:53:00 PM
You make it sound splendid, Twanna,this everlasting love. I really liked the line about "I am your personal pendant" This reads like a long lyrical letter of love to someone special. Great unique title Tangled Wings!
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 1/19/2012 12:02:00 PM
aww thank you Andrea :0)
Date: 1/4/2012 6:15:00 PM
Such a soft passionate love song, lovely way you take the reader into the mysteries of romance.
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 1/19/2012 12:01:00 PM
thank you Elizabeth
Date: 12/28/2011 7:23:00 PM
Smile ˜ I Am somewhat certain that I have said this truth unto Your Wonderful Beauty afore, my dear precious and beautiful Twanna ˜ I love the depthfulness I find inside Your Treaures mirrors reflections * Imagination becomes many times reality unto those whom truly can believe * And as for love, if it is not unconditional than I would venture to say that it is tainted at the very least ˜ I also love Your Beauties repeated reference unto tangled wings and what they may imply perhaps ˜ We were cast into this state for a reason that one day shall become ever so clear * Very Beautiful Painting &, Happy Holidays * My love to 6ou Always, John!:) ˜
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 12/28/2011 8:11:00 PM
Thank you very much John :)

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