Tangled

Like marionettes 
fixed expressions once carved
in virgin wood
always to smile or frown... or
a "Mona Lisa" grin
always to be wondered upon.

Have our strings grown
from a simple few
to too many,
always tangled with another;
tripping on thoughts and steps
that once came more simply.

What of love, when all must
magically work together?
When we fell in its quest
did we wish to be cut free
or lifted and untangled
so we may stay or walk away
once more whole?

(Inspired by Stephanie Deshpande's painting "Extrication")

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/3/2020 8:42:00 PM
Always a fan of your poems of depth Craig. This one gives much to ponder on. A fave for me. I have missed seeing you on FB...Maria Hugs
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Date: 2/2/2020 11:50:00 AM
Thought provoking and well expressed, Craig. Things have gotten so complex. I blame half of it on technology. The other day in library. Teen boys were so loud. Librarian gave them a "warning" such a joke. They just kept on as if nobody mattered. I had to be there to use internet. Dont have it right now. These text comments are killing me.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 2/2/2020 12:14:00 PM
It used to be one of the sane places to go but much has changed
Date: 1/31/2020 10:50:00 AM
love this Craig..the title esp. made me think it is the most appropriate end result of love - a tangled mess that one can never unravel unless the lovers themselves learn to just give without expectations..such an improbability :)
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Craig Cornish
Date: 1/31/2020 11:48:00 AM
Hugs Susan, and your statement about expectations is so darn true because giving should never be attached to anything for it truly to be "giving" with love or anything for that matter. Though we do live with some simple expectations like a thank you or a wave for letting someone in in traffic and that is certainly magnified in love...yet, how do we know where anyone "Is" at a moment in time - hence improbability!
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