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Tam Lin Tangled Branches tangled, know of Janet, Peggy and of Margaret too Tangled up in blue, when elf acknowledged primal love The one that’s true and savage When taking Margaret down Bundled in her black apparel Who knows what bent her father had, to warn her not to go The forest is steeped in secrets and naked to the touch Broken branches and virginity Babies come on Halloween leaves at evening Horses ride above the trees, white and black and brown When Margaret and her kind Come open to reality and tumble down Tastes that burn, built by fires on the twigs Creatures that turn, scurry through the leaves Transform, transfix, become there, something other Succumb, as elfin king and queen Beneath the broken branches of the trees, begin Created on 3/18/15 for “Tam Lin” Poetry Contest – Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 5/17/2015 3:55:00 PM
It is so interesting to note how the same stories go through culture after culture. Thanks so much for the entry. Congrad's on your verse winning! Light & Love
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Date: 5/17/2015 4:19:00 PM
Hi Debbie, Thank you for your interest and consideration of my entry. Yes. It is very interesting how tales go through time and culture. This one was fun to play with. Take care. Earl
Date: 5/16/2015 2:57:00 PM
Earl, Congratulations in DG's contest. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/16/2015 4:12:00 PM
Hi Linda, It's nice to hear from you. Thanks for commenting. I hope things are good with you. Have a wonderful week end. Take care. Earl
Date: 5/16/2015 10:33:00 AM
Earl, Congrats on your Tim Lin win..... SKAT
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Date: 5/16/2015 10:48:00 AM
Hi SKAT, Thanks. It is good to hear from you. I hope you have a wonderful week end. Take care. Earl
Date: 4/24/2015 11:52:00 PM
Intresting write, Earl, a 7 and good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/25/2015 8:32:00 AM
Hi Eve, Thank you so much for your interest and I appreciate your giving me a high score. I hope you find the time to listen to the Fairport Convention's version of Tam Lin. Have a great week end. Earl http://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=tam+lin+fairport+convention+youtube&FORM=VIRE5#view=detail&mid=584762E2CC205EB905C8584762E2CC205EB905C8
Date: 3/18/2015 10:41:00 PM
A wonderful read and entry this is for the contest Earl. Best of luck!
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Date: 3/19/2015 10:30:00 AM
Hi Connie, Thank you so much. This one was easy. I have been a fan of Tam Lin for over 25 years. The group Fairport Convention did the definitive Tam Lin song. It is magnificent. The version for the contest is interesting. I'm glad you enjoyed my interpretation of the story. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 3/18/2015 8:44:00 PM
Wow, incredible, Earl! I haven't listened to the song yet, but after reading this, I'm intrigued...best wishes and hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/18/2015 9:57:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much for your kind words. Tam Lin by Fairport Convention is one of my favorite tunes from the past. It is easy to find on You Tube. The contest version is also interesting. I hope you have a wonderful night. I'm glad you enjoyed my creation. Take care. Earl
Date: 3/18/2015 6:49:00 AM
I listened to the song Earl it is quite an epic tale - you have created vivid images - good luck in the contest :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/18/2015 7:07:00 AM
Good morning Jan, Thank you. I am listening to Fairport Convention's Tam Lin right now as I write this. It is their album Leige and Leaf. It is one of my favorite tunes. http://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=tam+lin+fairport+convention+youtube&FORM=VIRE5#view=detail&mid=584762E2CC205EB905C8584762E2CC205EB905C8 Janet was the original character. That is why I mention, "Janet, Peggy and Margaret in my creation. Thanks again. Take care. Earl

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