Tallulah's Band

There was a fine bird named Tallulah
who had the most fine alula*
she played on her drum
rum-a-tum-tum
Fine solos* for her sister Beulah.

Fair Beulah thought “I’ll not be outdone!”
“It’s my civic* duty to strum”
so this one high noon*
with her alula she tuned
An accompaniment to rum-a-tum-tum!

While the gals thought it their civic duty
to play music all root-a-toot-tootie 
they rocked the nest
and you know the rest
Both gals fell on their plump feathered booties!

*Palimdromes used alula [short bird feathers corresponding to a thumb]
  civic, solos, noon
  Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Allen Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 8:00 AM
This was very cute. A pleasant and enjoyable read. May happiness find it's way to your door and refuse to leave. TLee
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Burch Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 4:21 AM
LOL! Congratulations on your wins and successes Debbie! well done! This is funny...how clever! big hugs,love debby
Brown Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 6:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 7:26 PM
Great one Debbie. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:24 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb Wonderful piece. LOL Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. luv and hugs, Ralphie
Richards Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:16 PM
You have made me smile forwards and backwards....(just as a palidrome)...reading such an adorable poem!! one of my favorites!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Well done Debbie, Congratulations xx
Horne Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 1:35 PM
lol, had a good chuckle with this one, debs. i know david will love it too. many congrats on your wins. great suggestion for the sonnet title - i wasn't keen on mine and have changed it to abandoned shadows
Grisetti Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 11:22 AM
This poem had me smiling all the way through, right to the last line when I laughed, out loud. (don't like abbreviations)
Devonshire Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 9:23 AM
This is so cute, Deb. Laughed at the rhyme in the first verse - Tallulah, Alula and Beulah. Thanks for introducing us to "alula." Very funny, my friend. Wishing you success in the palindrome contest. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 6:57 AM
wow, you sure did a great set here with palindromes (whatever they are called). THAT's how it's done!!!
Henderson Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 3:31 PM
Good one Deb, you got me with "root a toot tootie
Burch Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 2:25 PM
LOL :D Debbie this is too funny! a limerick-palindrome...how cool is that! Love the punch line...lol Best wishes in the contest my friend...big huggsss,love debs
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 2:03 PM
This was a pleasant and funny poem Debbie, like it alot. Well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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