Tall Order

the old oak shoot from an acorn timberjack © Harry J Horsman 2018

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 6:56:00 AM

Cool poem!! Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed reading.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/7/2018 5:33:00 AM

I see this excellent Haiku has won, you are so good in your imagery. Congratulations Harry....Maria :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/5/2018 9:36:00 PM

I wish I was a human oak...from a shoot...when it's time to cut down I will share myself...

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/5/2018 4:00:00 PM

And down it falls.

Charles Messina

Date: 5/5/2018 3:11:00 PM

Congratulations on you win! Excellent haiku...Well deserved...way to go Harry!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/5/2018 9:49:00 AM

Fabulous haiku! Congratulations on your win! xomo

Probir Gupta

Date: 5/3/2018 9:41:00 AM

Brilliant ... Enjoyed ...

Eve Roper

Date: 5/2/2018 9:25:00 PM

Great imagery, Harry, congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/2/2018 8:59:00 PM

Excellent, harry, well done! Regards, Viv

MD Johnson

Date: 5/2/2018 7:38:00 PM

Extremely well done. Congratulations!

Mick Talbot

Date: 5/2/2018 7:33:00 PM

Harry this another I have just twigged. The old oak once a shoot from an acorn, it's trunk now acting as a jack holding up its branches, (a timberjack). The truth is my Mrs is very poorly and my mind is not working as it should with all the worry, so if I still can I will change your 3 to a 1. No, I have already used the option, my apology, to you and all. Will get back to you soon, Mick