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Tall In the Deep

I am TALL over Every badge And direct all Law agencies And love Words Like "Golly I might get caught with FISA over page's; I'll open up emails again And By golly, I won't refer to prosecution, but it sure was wreckeless. Golly I need To let the public know what she did with --" Marshy, Marshes try to cover works from a Deep State, but the guy directing stands a furlow and crate too TALL to be submerged Crow and Fox continue the call, call on TALL "By golly, I'll renew, and renew without stall" "Pages not involved with Russians." Renewals To FISA and TALL dwarfs the crowd in the hall "I did not leak that, I told a friend to share the Things I told him to say." Leaking lies fall from the pipes from the marsh back into the swamp Fusion bound by steele DNC money funding a stack found drunk pomp Russia, and collusion of No one but a chilupa in Kiev with the embassy and diplomats in foreign places with hopes of keeping global agendas in tact whilst signalling to young girls that it's about fulfilling dreams of the first lady President law under heel

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Date: 1/21/2020 4:19:00 PM
I am impressed by your talents, J.R --hard to create such shapes and still communicate--you did so well.
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J.R. Wren-Ingalls
Date: 1/26/2020 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Vijay! I absolutely love your stuff too...I always get so much out of your poetry!
Date: 1/20/2020 8:17:00 AM
Swamp water out more swamp water in, win,win, lie, lie, cheat, cheat, repeat, repeat. Impeach delete. Spend, spend, deny evidence, delete, delete. Win next election Democrats under feet, defeat defeat, their lunch, eat, eat!
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J.R. Wren-Ingalls
Date: 1/20/2020 4:15:00 PM
Exactly!
Date: 1/18/2020 7:22:00 AM
THank you for sharing your response to Becoming. I find your work really interesting. I wonder if we should talk through messaging. Wondering if what you write would be more accessible if you could write a sentence or two in the intro box. For example, what does(do) TALL mean to you. What is this TALL experience, memory, need, want? Or is mystery and unguided reader initiative more transparently important than vulnerably sharing more of your experience?
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J.R. Wren-Ingalls
Date: 1/19/2020 1:58:00 PM
This is an interesting suggestion and question you pose here. To tell you the truth, I had't thought about using the intro section at all. I will consider maybe doing this with some future poetry. Thanks for the compliments and the critique!

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