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Talking With God

*** Talking with God ***

I feel us 
Slowly shaking our heads
In unison,
With our delicious 
  slight smiles
Of shared understanding:
Much like the Mona Lisa’s
 (a bit less than fully amused),

As we recount
The long list I offer:
Of my unthinking;
My mistaking; too
Impatient reacting;
Discounting; and 
Ingratitudes.
All the opaque bits.

Transcending through
The thickness of 
  the rising
    of invisible air:
All around me 
And within me, revealing
In my downcast and glistening eyes…

Woe!  My Awe stretches out 
Prostrate,
To hear — first 
As a chuckle — 
The soft laughter of Abba saying,
 “Child.  Silly daughter.
No longer a crawling babe,
You stand still swaddled in 
The tapestry woven 
By the days of the many decades 
   you’ve lived, with
All your errs and joys
Becoming the frayed threads
I will re-weave within you beside me…

Silly daughter, hold
My hand, for age has brought
You back around to needing
Help to walk, and
There are just as many
Lessons yet to learn.
Observe!
Even the stars are
Held in place.”

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(c) sally young eslinger 2/13/22
Thanks be to God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 2/15/2022 5:19:00 AM
Amen Sally, just be open to Him I think after Reading this.. As you put we are not finished In learning.. And to who else should we go to Learn.? Does any know more.? satan teaches that here is the most important place.. But his Lease is running out.' that's why his message Has infiltrated the 'green movement' in that I Mean green gods agenda truly. For if we gain the Whole world & loose our souls what profits it us?
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Date: 2/14/2022 9:35:00 AM
Aloha Sally, your last stanza in this lovely poem really resonates with me. We never should stop learning. Happy Valentine’s Day! Blessings xxoo
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