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Talking To My Husband

In dulcet tones known just to me— (nonverbal, some would say), though delicate is not your speed, I hear what you can’t say. Consolation is to breathe. Allure means just to beg. Mirage is only what I see. Who’d pivot from your face? Today’s an anniversary? You’re with me every day. I’d favor flesh instead of this but death got in the way. January 31, 2019 Eight Word Anniversary Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/30/2019 4:24:00 PM
Such a lovely penned piece Rita, it really touches the heart to speak so elegantly in what must be very sad to write about. May you know peace this day. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 8/28/2019 10:42:00 AM
Absolutely incredible!
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Date: 8/27/2019 9:29:00 AM
thats lovely sentiments
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Date: 2/26/2019 3:46:00 AM
Beautiful poem, distant in sorrow, I enjoyed reading it, good use of the required words.
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Date: 2/25/2019 10:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rita.
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Date: 2/24/2019 1:50:00 AM
Rita, this simply took my breath away, I would have placed it much higher, but one of the rules was to use the word 'anniversary' in the title - but I love it so much I had to include it, congratulations!
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