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Talking About Body Parts On a Bus

Was talking about body parts out loud on a bus The reaction of passengers was utter disgust There was shock on their mugs They thought I was on drugs Giggled out loud as their ears they did clutch © Jack Ellison 2015 * Hey don't blame me... I just wake up in the morning and write 'em down! LOL

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Carol Eastman

Date: 4/21/2015 9:27:00 AM

Oh Jack... Jack... Jack... Were you a bad boy and slipped away from your Cathie... Dragon does that to me too... Lately a Troll slip his strings and ended up in my trunk... such mayheim ensued... Called the written poetry account 'A Troll in My Trunk'...

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/20/2015 8:25:00 PM

G'day young Jack... the way things are these days its a wonder you weren't asked if you had drugs to sell. See ya - Lindsay

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 8:36:00 PM

LOL Hope the week ahead is a good one for you, my friend!!! Cheers, Jack

Anna Hopper

Date: 4/20/2015 1:20:00 PM

Bahaha! These hilarious poems are just sitting in your head waiting to be written, aren't they?

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 2:39:00 PM

YUP! Managed to hide from the guys in the white coats for years!!! LOL Wish me luck... big hugs, Anna!!! xxx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/20/2015 11:06:00 AM

Interesting limerick.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 11:16:00 AM

Strange way of putting it! LOL xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/20/2015 8:33:00 AM

My my I'm on the train right now....think I'll keep my trap shut....lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 8:44:00 AM

Good thinking my friend!!! LOL

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/20/2015 6:32:00 AM

Were you talking about exactly what parts?// Does it include the one that farts? Oh, forgive me, I'm sorry// Forgot for awhile I'm a lady//shouldn't talk about something so silly//Oh but it's so much fun// whether out or under the sun!// Lotsa hugs and smiles// to you Jack and Jiles//Oh no, it's Jill//alright, i'm sorry, so...chill!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 6:45:00 AM

Kim, Kim, Kim... is that you??? You a lady, did you forget? Too much sun? LOL Love you dear Kimmie xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 4/20/2015 6:28:00 AM

Sounds like you "wuz" drunk on the bus!

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 6:47:00 AM

Never touch the stuff!!! LOL Well... maybe... okay, once in a while! LOL Just having some fun... love and big hugs, Jack xxx