Talk to me soul

Glenn Hughes Poetry Contest- RJL, Inspired by Glenn Hughes - BLACK COUNTRY COMMUNION - BCC V (2024) RESTLESS (Hughes/Bonamassa)
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Travel on
Soul, help me through this life
Many mistakes
Done just to thrive
Oh, yes, I did do

I remain
Searching to undo
The wrongs
I love to live true

Learn to talk to me
Guide me all along
I’ve failed to find you
As you hide deep inside
So feeble your voice
So feeble you speak

I come across
Hundred more instances a day
Minds of complexity
I can’t read their way

Can’t you, the know-all
Help me get along
Unhurt by any
None hurt by me

Guide me always, at all times
You better talk to me, Soul
Somewhere from deep inside me
Learn to talk to me not so feebly

In this life polite
Help me catch the vision of Him
To be worthy of Him
I have to walk in truth’s glaring light
I do
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Eslinger Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 11:06 AM
Triveni, hi!since the workings of the soul are important to me, i had to read this. Know that you’ve given your soul an emphatic invitation, so you WILL be answered. Wonder is n the way! God bless you…
mysore Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:52 PM
Soul is a true friend, never lies. Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. I am grateful to your kind words. Blessings & Cheers.
La France Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 8:54 PM
threveni, your poem is wonderful, I love it, and congratulations on your win, Constance
mysore Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 8:38 PM
thank you so much for this words of joy dear friend. Blessings & cheers.
Wolf Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 7:58 PM
Sounds like the Soul's waiting for you to start the dialogue...
mysore Avatar
August 12, 2024 at 2:17 AM
pleasant visit dear poet. thank you. waiting..yep.
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