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For 2025 Poetry Marathon Qualifiers Final Placement Poetry Contest sponsored by Mark Toney

 

Tales of the Checkerboard Trout

I

I'd say I'm a fisherman beyond compare.
Let me tell you, friend, what I caught there
on the bank of a wild mountain stream, 
when, at once, a sun ray and silver moon beam, 
like a dream, caught me by surprise,
under blue skies, when I was a boy of your size.  
It was the one and only (there could be no doubt)
rare and elusive, checkerboard trout.

II

I caught the checkerboard trout, it is true, 
but I'll tell you the truth.  Please keep it with you.
The poor little guy was the last of his kind.  
Now he's hiding in a place no one can find.
This is a secret, among only us three. 
You see, I threw him back.  I set him free.

III

Once, I was swimming in the stream by a pool,
when I spied a fisherman (a bit of a fool)
through the water top's sunshiny shimmer,
a fellow whose hopes weren't even a glimmer.
And as I was saying.  Listen up trout-boy -
use your checkerboard style to bring joy. 
No one can catch us.  All that can be caught
is the happiness that we have brought.

IV

Little Barney, I'm afraid,
brought home another failing grade.
All this has changed for the better.
Now, teacher says he's a go-getter. 
Barney brought for show-and-tell
water from a pool like a wishing well,
"This is the water, pretty sure, I am,
wherein the checkerboard trout once swam". 

V

Children, it's time for me to go away,
whether to Hell to burn or Heaven to play, 
because, eighty years ago today,  
I gave the checkerboard trout's secret away.
I made a trade with the devil, and I'm afraid, 
now is the time that it must be paid 
unless I could think of that one magic word,
which Grandpa spoke to me, which I once heard. 
I wish that I knew it, but I don't, so I say with a sigh,
eat all of your spinach, and I bid you goodbye.
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Gauthier Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:35 PM
Congrats on your fine finish in Mark's Marathon, David. Well done ~
Crandall Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 6:26 PM
Thanks, Line!
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 12:15 AM
You are a favorite newer member of Soup of mine, so I am so glad to see you with a numbered placement in the marathon. Well done, David. You know well how to spin a tale.
Crandall Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 2:24 PM
Thanks, Andrea, it's nice to hear that from such a skilled poet!
Ashley Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 9:21 PM
Dear David, congratulations for your exceptional run in the marathon contest and final placement! Your endearing poem showcases the golden warmth and engaging depth of your poetic pen. It’s an honor to share the podium with you. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Crandall Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 2:23 PM
Thanks, Susan!
Toney Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 3:09 PM
David, congratulations on your Top 15 placement in my 2025 Poetry Marathon FINAL! Thank you so much for contributing to the success of the contest. The poems of the 37 qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post. Time to take off those running shoes and give those feet a rest!
Crandall Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 3:49 PM
Mark, thanks for the opportunity to enter some of my poems that weren't for other contests! It was fun. I can't agree more to see Susan Ashley as first place, by the way. She's very good!
Godwin Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations my friend, your win was well deserved. A great write, David. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Crandall Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 3:12 PM
Thanks CayCay - much appreciated!
Ashley Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 7:54 AM
Dear David, congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Your poem's voice was warm and folksy and endearing. Wonderful imagery tells the story of the "checkerboard trout" with an enchanting vibe and poetic finesse. I especially liked this tidbit "sunshiny shimmer"- fantastic! Such a wonderful finale too. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Crandall Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 3:25 PM
Thanks for your kind words Susan!
Crandall Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 3:11 PM
Thanks for your kind words Susan!
Toney Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 12:07 AM
David, congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 1 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 2 has already started.
Crandall Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 3:11 PM
Thanks, Mark! I'm ready for Mile 2!
Rodgers Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 1:24 PM
Hello David, such a cool, heartfelt ride like sitting by that wild mountain stream right alongside you. I appreciate the humor and warmth in how you sign off—“eat all your spinach and I bid you goodbye”—perfect touch of down-to-earth charm after all those epic feels. It feels like a mix of a campfire story and a life lesson, told by a friend who’s lived and learned plenty. Blessings, My Friend Daniel
Crandall Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 4:05 PM
Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your great comments as always!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 4:26 PM
Fabulous creation, David...such an engaging and entertaining story in poetic form, each verse serving as a chapter moving your story forward. What skill you have...and the ending! POW! A delightful read, enjoy your evening, Sara
Crandall Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 6:16 PM
Thanks Sara, fun to write!
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