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Tale of the Night Movers

This was the seventh time we'd moved, 
In the wee morning before the sunrise
But somehow, I could feel God approved
And there'd be a great beginning apprised 

Once we lived way out in the country
I'd watch the daily train pass by 
Swinging in a tree swing hungry
Boy, how those days were on the fly

Before that move, seems I remember
I was asleep in my home in the city
Towards the ending of December
Woke in a rural area pretty     

We fled by night, time after time
But finally, one home stayed
I learned so much about earth's slime
Moving by night place to place afraid

One last move, in the light of morn
Another chance for a better life formed
I knew this was it, some stability norm
Life's opportunities to be transformed









Apprise-made aware of, increased in value
Date: 01-11-2023
Sponsor: Hilo Poet
Contest: Metrical Tale
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kerr Avatar
June 17, 2026 at 10:49 PM
Such an amazing narrative. One can sense the rapid pace of each move unfolding. Rhyming scheme beyond compare. Superb Sara. H
Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2026 at 4:25 AM
Why, thank you, Howard. I appreciate your visit and uplifting review. Sara K.
Mccann Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 11:56 PM
Gollee..! What a story! That "in a tree swing hungry" really got me! Elizabeth
Kendrick Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 4:07 AM
Elizabeth, I remember those days when life was not so easy, but I thank God that life was easier for my family than some. Your visits are appreciated. Sara
Adhikary Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 11:20 AM
Impressive use of imagery! Best of luck for the contest:-)
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Thank you, Ranaditya. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 2:34 PM
Interesting tale! Nice one!
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 2:27 AM
Thank you, Kim. Life can be interesting as long as you are not living it. Sara
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