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This was the seventh time we'd moved, In the wee morning before the sunrise But somehow, I could feel God approved And there'd be a great beginning apprised Once we lived way out in the country I'd watch the daily train pass by Swinging in a tree swing hungry Boy, how those days were on the fly Before that move, seems I remember I was asleep in my home in the city Towards the ending of December Woke in a rural area pretty We fled by night, time after time But finally, one home stayed I learned so much about earth's slime Moving by night place to place afraid One last move, in the light of morn Another chance for a better life formed I knew this was it, some stability norm Life's opportunities to be transformed Apprise-made aware of, increased in value Date: 01-11-2023 Sponsor: Hilo Poet Contest: Metrical Tale

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Date: 1/12/2023 11:56:00 PM
Gollee..! What a story! That "in a tree swing hungry" really got me! Elizabeth
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/13/2023 4:07:00 AM
Elizabeth, I remember those days when life was not so easy, but I thank God that life was easier for my family than some. Your visits are appreciated. Sara
Date: 1/12/2023 11:20:00 AM
Impressive use of imagery! Best of luck for the contest:-)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/12/2023 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Ranaditya. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 1/11/2023 2:34:00 PM
Interesting tale! Nice one!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/12/2023 2:27:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. Life can be interesting as long as you are not living it. Sara

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