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Tale of Dissecting Susies Brain

They thought it would be fun to dissect Susie’s brain But wait, Sue said. I am kind of allergic to pain. We have new meds, you will hardly feel a thing. She believed the surgeon, ‘cause she’s a ding-a-ling. The doctors hypnotized her and she stayed in place While they cut a tiny hole in her front lobe face They extracted a bit of her teeny sand brain I’m naked! The piece yelled, and don’t forget my train! They pulled out a gown, a petticoat and a bridal veil. I am eager to see what you’ll do next said Dale. Wait! Said Tori as I was telling this story to her Who is Dale and were her dendrites still pure? Since I was rudely interrupted, the tale is now dead. So now poor Susie is stuck without the rest of her head. I do not feel guilty, I am the writer, thus the boss. Not knowing the ending is the reader’s loss.

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