Taking Shelter

clouds graying drops fall ceaseless down pour cats under the shed 12/29/2021

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Date: 12/31/2021 5:29:00 AM

Your imagery is amazing me in just three small lines. Happy New Year Eve.

Date: 12/30/2021 8:54:00 AM

Cats are smart. I have two strays. They take over my covered deck, when it rains and stay very dry, I liked your Haiku. **** Pangie xx

Date: 12/30/2021 1:22:00 AM

No doubt, cats don't like water. Lovely haiku.

Eve Roper
Date: 12/30/2021 8:08:00 AM

Thank you,my friend, they have to go somewhere. They are my brothers cats. Happy New Years with best wishes and resolutions

Date: 12/29/2021 10:35:00 PM

A lovely haiku, Eve, I can imagine the scene:)

Eve Roper
Date: 12/30/2021 8:07:00 AM

Thank you,Jo, for the compliment. Happy New Years with best wishes and resolutions

Date: 12/29/2021 8:46:00 PM

I can just picture the poor kitties huddling and shivering under that shed. Nicely done, Eve! HNY - 2022! Cheers, gw

Eve Roper
Date: 12/30/2021 8:06:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon, they do like to stay out of the rain. Happy New Years with best wishes and resolutions