Taking Responsibility

Crime is a real problem in Jamaica 
Hundreds are dead, there's no solution to the problem
Even the police are giving up ...the police commissioner has resigned ...sir trust me, no one man can solve this problem...you did your best 

In the meantime, we are still counting bodies  

We hear the cries but ...no solutions
We only can call on God now 
The problem started long before our time, when garrison politics was the order of the day 
Few are educated 
No real opportunities 
The big man distributing guns in the inner city 
Young men smoking weed on the corner 
Pregnant teenagers
Women selling themselves for a few dollars 
No father in the house and our men still believe they should have" gal in a bungle "
Where is the church in all of this? busy talking about the cover of a phone book and nothing on crime ...seriously

We can't win the war on crime until we win the war in the family, we need real role models, we need real men …yes MEN

The truth is until we start teaching our men to be responsible we will never win the war on crime 

until it's at our front door before we get serious 

When our women stop washing bloody clothing for their gun men son and mate
Yes, we all need to stop accepting bull **** before all this will end

Until then we will continue to count bodies, when will it end, when the society start taking responsibility

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/16/2017 12:11:00 PM
Mercy, so devastating very powerful voice thanks for sharing. There's a reason it's over 500 reads. Blessings --James
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