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Taking It Slow Premiere Contest Winner

It might as well be another late afternoon when new moon rises, bathed in honeydew and gleaming with soft weariness: above, mantled clouds bleach the lanes with first tinges of blue-gray light, while figure sway pouring tea and mint cheese on park benches, whistling strains of linear intervals…intervals where violin tones tap the breeze for some hint of mellow hush. This sense of accepting what weighs or buoys the tracks of soothing energy pushes feet to circle among tumbleweeds, ready to sink into hours of a genial night: Like so, throats wheeze the vowels of tender tunes brushing refrains of charity for some sprig of warm comfort: after all, how can a bursting sun account for the speed of fingers clutching nicks of time mortal in workrooms, racing barbed rails of hours hours lashed by the 9 to 6 office grind… and to drop, drift, dry off the weary body crackling stiff bones … it’s about time for half-closed eyes to rest from a dazed world demanding submission; That is why heaven fashioned nightfall misty. ............................. Piece De Resistance Contest Written 5/14/2018 Re-entered 7/18/2018

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Date: 6/2/2018 6:52:00 PM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Date: 5/17/2018 5:27:00 PM
Amazing, Nette. You are one of Rob's very favorite writers here because of your stunning imagery as shown here. BIG congrats. I counted myself lucky to come in 7th haha.
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Date: 5/16/2018 1:16:00 AM
Brilliantly done Nette. Congratulations. Tom
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Date: 5/15/2018 9:54:00 AM
Ha, now! This is pure poetry. Love the fascinating imagery...only you can do it.
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Date: 5/15/2018 6:29:00 AM
This makes me want to take that vacation leave from work . Congratulations!
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Date: 5/15/2018 2:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
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Date: 5/15/2018 12:16:00 AM
My thanks and congratulations.
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Date: 5/13/2018 8:54:00 PM
Nette.. Lay me down to rest into your genial night. This mellow muse makes your heavenly nightfull misty kind of sexy!
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Date: 5/13/2018 3:52:00 PM
Well crafted poetry as always nette..excellent details and imagery! The essence I founds in these words: it’s about time for half-closed eyes to rest from a dazed world demanding submission; That is why heaven fashioned nightfall misty.
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Date: 5/13/2018 3:43:00 PM
Lovely imagery and an induced urge to take it easy after prolonged hours of work. Love your end line! Hugs // paul
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