Taking a Toll

Weeping incessantly
Teardrops kissing the winds
The panged heart does throb again…

Where are the pleasantries?
Who has taken its joy?
Sadly colored portraits, blues…

Dreary is the pained soul,
That has no hand to hold…
Sparks of joy, must soon return 

I am as a lost child 
In a land of soulless strangers, 
Just a dreamer seeking a dream… 

My angst is cloaked,
Within puffs of smoke--
A heart grieves, pained…

Distress is calling my name– 
Oh that I could soar once more
Yet, I have no wings to fly. 

I’d dare dream of pleasantries 
Nesting high in clear blue skies




Comments: Just writing friends all is well :-) Be Blessed, Always Adell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/1/2008 6:16:00 AM
Adell - this poem is very beautiful in a very sad way - I hope everything is ok - God Bless
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Date: 7/31/2008 11:39:00 AM
I think most can relate to times like this. I hope no matter what you keep dreaming. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing these thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Blessings to you. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 7/31/2008 10:42:00 AM
Oh dear Adell, this is just so sad and painful to read. I do know this feeling, written and captured so well. I just do hope it is not about you. Such a lost and lonely place to be. A very emotional write. Love, Shar
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