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I was out one day walking, along the glad sounding shore, Gathering pretty seashells, and watching the seagulls soar. To the left were lofty mountains, touching the azure skies, To the right, sparkling ocean, and ahead the butterflies! In early afternoon sunshine, I enjoyed the warmth's caress, And breathed deeply of the salty air, as it was very fresh. I swung my picnic basket, because I was feeling so joyous, As an owl gives a hoot at dusk, when he's happily mysterious! I had plans to take a walk, and after lunch to explore caves, And later to seek refreshment, in those ever present waves! So I spent some time walking, bare foot in the pebbly sand, When suddenly a thing occurred, upon which I hadn't planned. The sky by degrees grew darker, as the breeze grew in speed, Then rain came slashing down, sparing my quandary no heed! What happened to that lovely day? What happened to the sun? What happened to all of my fine plans, before they had begun? Like a bloom that closes its petals, at the first sign of rain, For when it begins showering, there is no more warmth to gain! I'd known other days like this, so unlike what was promised, As the sweet dream which vanishes, in the dawn's early bliss. The wind was now a hurricane, and I didn't know where to run. It carried me out to sea, before attempts at flight had begun, I was a champion swimmer, and I fought my way back to shore, Then I darted into a cave, one which I'd planned to explore. I really found it hard to believe, that I'd now found a haven, As emerald boughs are most welcoming, to an exhausted raven! So I lay down and closed my eyes, to dream of better days, When dazzling sunshine kissed me, with its golden warm rays. The morning found me cramped, and more than a little bit sore, So, I walked outside resolved, to leave my cave by the shore. The sunshine was encouraging, and the wind was calmer now too, Until it picked me up and blew me, back to the cave I once knew! Whatever was this madness? And how could this thing be true? 'Twas hard not to take it personally, when options now were few. So I picked myself right back up, and angrily stormed outside, Whereupon I was immediately given, the by now familiar ride. I tried twice more to leave, but each time concluded the same, I ended up just where I started, as if it was some new game. Like the gay caroussel that spins, in one neverending circle, Bringing choruses of laughter, until the skies grow purple! Next to my cave was a seaberry shrub, so I had food at least, And I had candy in my pocket, so my hunger was much decreased. But I could not leave this cave, for I was a captive of the wind, So I began to probe its depths, to see what lay around the bend. In my pocket was a lighter, I had brought for probing the caves, Now it could be put to superb use, like the sun's endless blaze I walked for what seemed hours, as the cave went on for miles, Until I saw the welcome sight, which caused me sudden smiles. Up ahead there was daylight, and an aperture tall and wide, And I could hear talk and laughter, of the many people outside! Changing my appearance greatly, I put my hair in a unique style, Then quickly slipped into the crowd, hoping to be lost for awhile. The mood was one of gaiety, they were watching a parade go by, It was a solemn gay celebration, for it was the 4th of July! I stopped at a water fountain, and drank for what seemed hours, Like a bud at last bursting to bloom, whose scent overpowers! I walked the paths of gaiety, until they led me at last to home, For it is the one that surpasses, all the others I have known. The first thing I did at home, was to enjoy a shower and a meal, Then sleeping peacefully out of the wind, had enormous appeal! The next day I altered my appearance, I must say permanently, So that when I ventured out of doors, I wouldn't have to flee. I cut and dyed my hair, and with my makeup I wore a new face, Hoping that the ceaseless wind, wouldn't overpower me anyplace. Though it has been ten years, the gusty wind never found me out, And to this precise day, I am not quite sure what he was about! Did he want me for his bride? Or to show his authority upon land? Whyever did the wandering wind, suddenly decide to take a stand? Like the tree that grows in the forest, and reaches for the sun, Its lovely greenery and birdsong fun, whispering look and listen! I've never told anyone of my adventure, for that would be unwise, In the event that the wild wind, has the milky stars for his spies. But these days the 4th of July, holds a special import for me, Not only as our national birth, but the day that I was set free!

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Date: 8/24/2020 2:04:00 PM
You excel here, Evelyn, with your couplet tales, I just love the way you are never without, the piece of candy, your lighter, for you God always provides. I've said it before, your stories literally dance down the lines, taking the reader with you, forever, taking the trials, but, never end up down or out, just refreshed for that next adventure, we are all waiting to be taken on, a pure manifester of thoughs and dreams, yet, still remains a humble maestro of the art . . . : )
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/24/2020 2:14:00 PM
It's so wonderful to hear such positive and appreciative remarks, Indiana. Thank you very much for taking the time to let me know how much you enjoyed this story, and others. It means the world to me. Blessings. :)
Date: 8/16/2020 11:44:00 AM
You are an expert in couplets and I'm sure your poem will be Great
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Silent One
Date: 8/16/2020 3:30:00 PM
That is your choice... However it's about what you feel is your sanctuary
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/16/2020 12:55:00 PM
Do you mean this particular poem? I would be happy to enter it, if you don't consider it to be off topic. I wasn't quite sure.
Date: 8/16/2020 8:28:00 AM
Woah these get bigger and bigger!!!!! I was on a long journey with you here.. Inspired by you, I also wrote a poem using couplets and have a contest with the couplet theme!
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Date: 8/16/2020 9:43:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely thoughts. I was so happy to take that journey with you. I am honored to have been an inspiration to you. I have read your beautiful poem, Silent Sanctuary, and I couldn't have enjoyed it more. Maybe I'll enter your contest, if I'm inspired with an idea. Have a wonderful day. :)
Date: 8/15/2020 6:22:00 PM
I loved this adventure so much that I read it twice.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/15/2020 6:24:00 PM
Your words fill me with joy! Thank you, Caren.
Date: 8/15/2020 4:56:00 PM
A lovely imagination here...Expressed with joy...a nice combination...
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/15/2020 5:02:00 PM
I'm so glad you liked it, Arturo. I love writing these stories. :)

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