Take Notice

When will you ever notice me?
I know you see me as one of the guys
But I’m someone who loves you
Yes, I love to do things you love to do
But something in me has changed 
I don't want to just be your best bud
I want more, I love you so much
I’m just a girl who wants your heart, so
Please let me into your heart


8-19-17
Inspired by the” Please let me into your heart contest”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 2:33 PM
Very honest plea for unrequited love to be returned, Alexis. You expressed it w/straightforwardness ... no ambiguity or mixed signals. Wonderful poem. An instant fave for sure. Love and smiles.
Vaso Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Ah, I think we have all be in these shoes at some point in our lives! Nice poem!
Sands Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 10:00 AM
Good one for the contest Alexis. I hope it does well :)
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