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When will you ever notice me? I know you see me as one of the guys But I’m someone who loves you Yes, I love to do things you love to do But something in me has changed I don't want to just be your best bud I want more, I love you so much I’m just a girl who wants your heart, so Please let me into your heart 8-19-17 Inspired by the” Please let me into your heart contest”

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Date: 8/22/2017 2:33:00 PM
Very honest plea for unrequited love to be returned, Alexis. You expressed it w/straightforwardness ... no ambiguity or mixed signals. Wonderful poem. An instant fave for sure. Love and smiles.
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:57:00 AM
Ah, I think we have all be in these shoes at some point in our lives! Nice poem!
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Date: 8/19/2017 10:00:00 AM
Good one for the contest Alexis. I hope it does well :)
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