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TAKE MY HAND HERE'S MY HEART

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surreal dreamlike reality unexpected to say the least savoring prized moments precious pearls strung one by one with bated breath deep in our heart we realize and know all too very well there can only be one first there can only be one first genuine in appreciating its gift a rare form of blessing in its purest sincerity to stretch beyond infinity now that we grasp how precious truly it can be there can be only one first of that we can be sure and all considered most likely most undoubtedly our last carvings in the silk of time ripples across the ocean to somehow capture treasure and immortalize date: August 25, 2021 contest: August 2021 NA's Poetry sponsor: Constance LaFrance Originally posted on July 30, 2021

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Date: 8/1/2021 1:58:00 AM
carvings in the silk of time ripples across the ocean to somehow capture treasure and immortalize...I do like how you closed this poem...Delice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/1/2021 4:17:00 AM
thank you very much, Delice ~
Date: 7/31/2021 8:06:00 PM
You have explained precious memories so well here, and the importance of firsts "prized moments precious pearls strung one by one" Lovely!
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Date: 8/1/2021 4:17:00 AM
thanks, Caren ~
Date: 7/31/2021 12:55:00 PM
A feast of a word salad. Well penned my friend. Wonderful imagery. I agree with Gershon... last line is a doozy. Stay well my friend.
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Date: 7/31/2021 3:09:00 PM
Thank you, David. Most appreciated ~
Date: 7/30/2021 2:29:00 PM
This is superb, Line. The last stanza is simply to die for. A FAVE for me. Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 7/30/2021 4:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. I was afraid it was too convoluted ~