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Take Me To the Stars and Beyond

Take me to the stars and beyond by W. Neels and I. Desai The stars must be aligned orbiting around our naked bodies that explains the tingling feeling from all the love we've made, my senses are still reeling my body is yearning, yearning and wishing for you to touch, to caress, to take control of every aroused inch of it to the flickering stars and beyond reverberating through every fiber of my being... wishful this union will last a lifetime and more... I open my eyes and see heaven breathing heavily, staring at me with a content and satisfied look. And in that look, I see tomorrow... I see... forever "Reason for it being my favorite: My very first collab and it was with my best friend" "Myself and my friend wrote this piece, via text messages, he lives in a different city and this was the end result..30/01/2010"

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Date: 1/29/2012 3:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Wilma. Powerful emotions expressed in this collaboration. Good job. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/28/2012 8:57:00 AM
wonderful winning piece Wilma..congrats for this awesome endeavor of great creativity.. awesome as always my friend..
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Date: 1/27/2012 11:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is a very impressive entry.
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Date: 1/27/2012 7:51:00 PM
WOW, how did I miss THIS one, was it way in the back of your pages?? This is fantastic, Wilma. Congrats to you and your BEST friend!!
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Date: 1/27/2012 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your amazing write. Good job. Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:29:00 AM
Wilma congrats on your win, hot stuff, he needs to move cities ASAP..David
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:19:00 AM
To collaborate from such a distance and still achieve this level of excellence with only texting is a marvel to what people and technology can do to bring to minds together. Congratulations on a worthy win.
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Date: 1/27/2012 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/27/2012 6:03:00 AM
What wonderful use of technology!! Congrats to you both on this steamy collab.! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 1/27/2012 12:58:00 AM
WILAM, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:56:00 AM
Dear Wilma, ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer
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Date: 9/21/2011 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2011 7:11:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on a fantastic win with this favorite poem so awesome my friend...luv...
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:48:00 PM
Congratultions on the win in the contest of P.D., Wilma
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Date: 9/20/2011 11:50:00 AM
Beautiful collaboration. Congratulations Wilma
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Date: 8/22/2010 8:27:00 AM
Wow, Wilma, great undertaking! Desai must be an Indian name, isn't it? Great co-write!....Al die beste van Gert:)
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Date: 8/21/2010 7:07:00 AM
What a delight to read is this co-write. I hope we get some more Wilma >> James
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:59:00 AM
beautiful!Celene.
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Date: 8/21/2010 5:21:00 AM
Great write!!! Lucky man... always Michael
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Date: 8/20/2010 11:22:00 AM
Very passionate write..Must be a close relationship..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/20/2010 9:22:00 AM
thank you for sharing this poem with us. i enjoyed it.
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:33:00 AM
Wowsa! This is a sizzling romantic poem! Very nicely done and I enjoyed it this morning! Thank you for lovely comments :) hugs, Kris~
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Date: 8/20/2010 7:50:00 AM
A wonderful collaboration, Wilma. So much devotion and romance shown here. And it flows so smoothly that I could not tell who wrote which verse. Very well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/20/2010 5:25:00 AM
ooh wee, ooh wee.. glad to read this here finally!! See oh see you got me rhyming here really! Ok , I'll cut it out- haha. Well I have yet to reply to your email in a while ok? Only got my connection back today haha it fizzled out last night soooo I just slept!! haha see? everything's conspiring that I get more sleep! -- now I am catching up here since I have like 2 days left--well hottie write you have here and I am still amazed on how you did this via text & line by line-- way to go!! nikko :)
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