Take Me To the Stars and Beyond

Take me to the stars and beyond by W. Neels and I. Desai


The stars must be aligned
orbiting around our naked bodies
that explains the tingling feeling
from all the love we've made,
my senses are still reeling
my body is yearning, 
yearning and wishing for you
to touch, to caress,
to take control of 
every aroused inch of it
to the flickering stars and beyond
reverberating through every fiber of my being...
wishful this union will last a lifetime and more...
I open my eyes and see heaven
breathing heavily,
staring at me with a content and satisfied look.
And in that look,
I see tomorrow...
I see...
forever 

"Reason for it being my favorite: 
My very first collab and it was with my best friend"

"Myself and my friend wrote this piece, 
via text messages, he lives in a different city and
this was the end result..30/01/2010"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Merryman Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 3:01 PM
Congrats on your win, Wilma. Powerful emotions expressed in this collaboration. Good job. Love, Kim
Sweetheart Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 8:57 AM
wonderful winning piece Wilma..congrats for this awesome endeavor of great creativity.. awesome as always my friend..
Pettit Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 11:51 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is a very impressive entry.
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 7:51 PM
WOW, how did I miss THIS one, was it way in the back of your pages?? This is fantastic, Wilma. Congrats to you and your BEST friend!!
Arno Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 6:14 PM
Congratulations on your amazing write. Good job. Best regards, Jon
Williams Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 8:29 AM
Wilma congrats on your win, hot stuff, he needs to move cities ASAP..David
Eastman Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 8:19 AM
To collaborate from such a distance and still achieve this level of excellence with only texting is a marvel to what people and technology can do to bring to minds together. Congratulations on a worthy win.
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" Wilma. Love, Carol
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 6:03 AM
What wonderful use of technology!! Congrats to you both on this steamy collab.! Blessings, Rhonda
A   Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 12:58 AM
WILAM, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d
A   Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Dear Wilma, ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 3:14 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Wilma. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 7:11 PM
Congrats Wilma on a fantastic win with this favorite poem so awesome my friend...luv...
Mehta Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Congratultions on the win in the contest of P.D., Wilma
Quigley Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Beautiful collaboration. Congratulations Wilma
Knop Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 8:27 AM
Wow, Wilma, great undertaking! Desai must be an Indian name, isn't it? Great co-write!....Al die beste van Gert:)
Fraser Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:07 AM
What a delight to read is this co-write. I hope we get some more Wilma >> James
Bloomsfield Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:59 AM
beautiful!Celene.
Falotico Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 5:21 AM
Great write!!! Lucky man... always Michael
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Very passionate write..Must be a close relationship..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Cobb Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 9:22 AM
thank you for sharing this poem with us. i enjoyed it.
Walters Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 8:33 AM
Wowsa! This is a sizzling romantic poem! Very nicely done and I enjoyed it this morning! Thank you for lovely comments :) hugs, Kris~
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August 20, 2010 at 7:50 AM
A wonderful collaboration, Wilma. So much devotion and romance shown here. And it flows so smoothly that I could not tell who wrote which verse. Very well done! Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 5:25 AM
ooh wee, ooh wee.. glad to read this here finally!! See oh see you got me rhyming here really! Ok , I'll cut it out- haha. Well I have yet to reply to your email in a while ok? Only got my connection back today haha it fizzled out last night soooo I just slept!! haha see? everything's conspiring that I get more sleep! -- now I am catching up here since I have like 2 days left--well hottie write you have here and I am still amazed on how you did this via text & line by line-- way to go!! nikko :)
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