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Take Me To the Balcony Romeo

Take Me to the Balcony, Romeo! On this joyful warm Spring Day, Let's hide in our private balcony and play! This is all, your sweetest Juliet asks. In your young, most passionate arms to bask. You, like a god of a scented,sensual Spring, On my unblemished lips, please do implant, Sensual seeds of hot moisture that blows So brightly, in your heart's love chamber! Run your most seductive hands through My shining tresses fondly waiting! I am totally yours for the taking. Kiss me, ever so softly now! Yes, loving you Romeo, for eternity. A most desirable and yet, I pray, Not a dangerous undertaking. Just we two., eternally,magic making! Amorously, Your Juliet Panagiota Romios 4/29/ 2019 I:45pm PST

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Robert Lindley

Date: 4/30/2019 6:45:00 AM

You my great friend do romance so very well. "" You, like a god of a scented,sensual Spring,"" What a verse!!! Another great jewel for me to fav...

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/30/2019 10:35:00 AM

How I loved writing this one! It took quite a while. I am a romantic, yes. See my comment to Caren.. Wishing you a day of "Poetic Joy." Thank you..Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/29/2019 11:26:00 PM

Wow, Juliet, you are on "fire". Romeo would be a fool to let you slip away after reading this delightful missive. Go get him, woman!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/30/2019 1:42:00 AM

Fomeo...I think he and I will lunch on the balcony. With some wine in golden goblets with jewels on the outside and matching plates! Panagiota aka Juliet

David Mchattie

Date: 4/29/2019 7:51:00 PM

I try to imagine my wife talking like this but it's never going to happen. Not her fault. She doesn't have much to work with. Great poem. Have a good day my friend.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/30/2019 12:52:00 AM

Hi David, neither do I. I don't go around speaking this way in real life. In my poetic life and mind I do think this way. A legend in my own mind, eh? Love your wife with understanding and compassion. I would love to meet a man who spoke like Romeo..that movie makes me weep! Gratefully, Panagiota

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/29/2019 6:54:00 PM

Whew! You forgot to provide a fire extinguisher with this hot one, Juliet! ~ gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/30/2019 12:20:00 AM

Hysterical... was a long but fun write. I do choose words meticulously. There are hundreds to choose from. I have to imagine the entire scene, as others poets do. It is similar to a painting. The words must be the exact hue. Relaxing as all get out.Panagiota.. Juliet if only,

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/29/2019 3:45:00 PM

What a wonderful depiction of romantic feelings..magic and more..in your poem Panagiota.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/29/2019 3:56:00 PM

Vijay...I thought this woukd be an easy write. Not so. But felt complete, after it was done, nice to see you again Panagiota