Take Me Home To Inverness

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Tristan rode the moor his clan's plaid flew in the wind. the castle lay near my heart waited there for him take me home to Inverness

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James Inman

Date: 1/24/2016 5:44:00 PM

Lovely, romantic poem, Lin. I'm with Silent One, where's the novel? This would make a great teaser on the inside cover.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/24/2016 5:54:00 PM

lol James. A novel is a long term commitment. I don't know enough about Scotland to write it, but I'm all for flying over and checking it out! Thanks for such nice comments.

White Sage

Date: 1/24/2016 4:11:00 PM

hmmm, you've got great imaginations...and Tristan's a nice name too...well written Lin, just don't get lost on the way

Lin Lane
Date: 1/24/2016 4:22:00 PM

Tristan and I know the way home...lol and if we didn't we'd just give our beautiful steed his head. Thanks so much, Sage.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/24/2016 8:44:00 AM

A superb TANKA written in historical/mythological style... strict 57577 meter too! Well done Lin!! Best wishes, Keith

Lin Lane
Date: 1/24/2016 8:50:00 AM

Merci, Monsieur! I really like the form.