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Take Me Home To Inverness

Tristan rode the moor
          his clan's plaid flew in the wind.
                  the castle lay near
          my heart waited there for him
           take me home to Inverness

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2016

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James Inman Date: 1/24/2016 5:44:00 PM Lovely, romantic poem, Lin. I'm with Silent One, where's the novel? This would make a great teaser on the inside cover. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 1/24/2016 5:54:00 PM lol James. A novel is a long term commitment. I don't know enough about Scotland to write it, but I'm all for flying over and checking it out! Thanks for such nice comments.

White Sage Date: 1/24/2016 4:11:00 PM hmmm, you've got great imaginations...and Tristan's a nice name too...well written Lin, just don't get lost on the way Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 1/24/2016 4:22:00 PM Tristan and I know the way home...lol and if we didn't we'd just give our beautiful steed his head. Thanks so much, Sage.

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 1/24/2016 8:44:00 AM A superb TANKA written in historical/mythological style... strict 57577 meter too! Well done Lin!! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 1/24/2016 8:50:00 AM Merci, Monsieur! I really like the form.