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Take Me Home

I turn my head I catch a glimpse 
saffron flowers floating down 
lying close unto thy grace 
a beauty glow upon a face 

Kiss my soul and carry me 
kiss my lips at sun's last light 
take me home with you tonight

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2017

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Funom Makama Date: 7/19/2017 1:20:00 PM You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind. Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/18/2017 7:56:00 AM Romantic mood dear, Tim , hope she will take you home tonight and every night that follows after that! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/17/2017 2:27:00 PM - Beautiful written, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 7/17/2017 1:34:00 PM Lovely write Tim. Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 7/17/2017 1:04:00 PM A very beautiful sentiment. Well done. Login to Reply

Akkina Downing Date: 7/17/2017 11:56:00 AM Just the title alone made me wanna sing out loud. Lol! So romantic and sweet, I love it :) Login to Reply

White Wolf Date: 7/17/2017 9:57:00 AM Lovely as always, Tim! Get a burger for me! Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 7/17/2017 9:46:00 AM This was really nice my friend. Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 7/17/2017 9:15:00 AM Beautiful Tim, just beautiful. This is sweet :) Login to Reply

Lin Lane Date: 7/17/2017 9:02:00 AM Sounds like you've been smitten, Mr. Smith. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 7/19/2017 2:21:00 PM Have it your way! Tim Smith Date: 7/17/2017 9:07:00 AM I'm smitten by the view of Burger King across the parking lot as I sweat on this treadmill...lol