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Take Me Home

I turn my head I catch a glimpse 
saffron flowers floating down 
lying close unto thy grace 
a beauty glow upon a face 

Kiss my soul and carry me 
kiss my lips at sun's last light 
take me home with you tonight

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2017

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July 19, 2017 at 1:20 PM

You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 18, 2017 at 7:56 AM

Romantic mood dear, Tim , hope she will take you home tonight and every night that follows after that!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 17, 2017 at 2:27 PM

- Beautiful written, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

July 17, 2017 at 1:34 PM

Lovely write Tim.

July 17, 2017 at 1:04 PM

A very beautiful sentiment. Well done.

July 17, 2017 at 11:56 AM

Just the title alone made me wanna sing out loud. Lol! So romantic and sweet, I love it :)

July 17, 2017 at 9:57 AM

Lovely as always, Tim! Get a burger for me!

July 17, 2017 at 9:46 AM

This was really nice my friend.

July 17, 2017 at 9:15 AM

Beautiful Tim, just beautiful. This is sweet :)

July 17, 2017 at 9:02 AM

Sounds like you've been smitten, Mr. Smith.

July 19, 2017 at 2:21 PM

Have it your way!

July 17, 2017 at 9:07 AM

I'm smitten by the view of Burger King across the parking lot as I sweat on this treadmill...lol

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