Take Me

Oh, the air that surrounds you
   Is ever sweeter to me.
 
To be near you is such joy ~
   Take me...I am yours
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 3:55 AM
Congrats Daniel on big win with this juicy one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
Brown Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 8:13 AM
Congratulations Daniel, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 7:49 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is a fine entry.
Mehta Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 3:03 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of Linda, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 1:51 PM
simply but simply beautiful! congratulations. Luv, Andrea
Calhoun Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 4:17 AM
Hi Daniel - Congrats on your BIG WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC
Freeman Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 8:51 PM
Congratulations Daniel on your worthy #4 place. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 7:48 PM
Congrats Dan o n your success in my Spicy for men only contest with this thrilling entry luv.. appreciate u supporting my contests....
K. Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 8:12 AM
Very sweet indeed, Dan :) definitely induces smiles :) best of luck in the contest and thank you for dropping by my poems :) -- nikko :)
Horsman Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 6:37 PM
discovering a new form here, Daniel, this is very profound, Harry
Culverhouse Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 6:20 PM
well written simplicitic poem!
Roberts Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 5:36 PM
love it
Richards Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 5:33 PM
Ahhhh.....breathtaking love !! :)
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