Take Me

Oh, the air that surrounds you Is ever sweeter to me. To be near you is such joy ~ Take me...I am yours

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Date: 1/25/2011 3:55:00 AM

Congrats Daniel on big win with this juicy one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta

Date: 1/23/2011 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations Daniel, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Date: 1/22/2011 7:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. This is a fine entry.

Date: 1/22/2011 3:03:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of Linda, Daniel

Date: 1/22/2011 1:51:00 PM

simply but simply beautiful! congratulations. Luv, Andrea

Date: 1/22/2011 4:17:00 AM

Hi Daniel - Congrats on your BIG WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Date: 1/21/2011 8:51:00 PM

Congratulations Daniel on your worthy #4 place. Agape, Moses

Date: 1/21/2011 7:48:00 PM

Congrats Dan o n your success in my Spicy for men only contest with this thrilling entry luv.. appreciate u supporting my contests....

Date: 1/15/2011 8:12:00 AM

Very sweet indeed, Dan :) definitely induces smiles :) best of luck in the contest and thank you for dropping by my poems :) -- nikko :)

Date: 1/6/2011 6:37:00 PM

discovering a new form here, Daniel, this is very profound, Harry

Date: 1/5/2011 6:20:00 PM

well written simplicitic poem!

Date: 1/5/2011 5:36:00 PM

love it

Date: 1/5/2011 5:33:00 PM

Ahhhh.....breathtaking love !! :)