Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Limerick

Take Love's Sip

Take Love's Sip

Life is all too often filled with discord.
People fighting wars, brothers die abhorred.
Visiting fantasy-land,
Dreams float by without demand.
Get a grip!  Take love's sip; follow the Lord.

© July 31, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 2, 2010 at 10:03 AM Congratulations to you on your win Dane Ann in John Freeman's contest "Limerick""Choose your own subject and Create your own Category". Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor August 1, 2010 at 1:01 PM Congrats, Dane. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 1, 2010 at 11:43 AM Congrats Dane Ann on your number one win in the Limerick contest with these great words...enjoy and happy Sunday my friend.... with luv..

Debbie Guzzi August 1, 2010 at 7:17 AM You go winner gal! SOUP MAIL Light & Love

James Fraser August 1, 2010 at 4:27 AM Many congrats on your fine win in John's wonderful contest >> James

John Freeman July 31, 2010 at 10:52 PM Beautiful wisdom's cup Dane. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Karen Dominick July 31, 2010 at 8:45 AM Good reminder for today! Thank you! - All the best, - Karen

Dr.Ram Mehta July 31, 2010 at 6:19 AM A nice approach to the theme of faith. Good luck in the contest