Take Control

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~Take Control~ (Free Verse) Take control of your tongue Take control of your eyes Take control of your ears Control your body everyday You are in complete control Of everything you eat and do, What you put in your mouth and speak And what you choose to see God gives us all a free will To decide what to do with Everything & anything we do Be wary where you put your faith Take control of your body& mind Take control of your life my friend! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2007 February.05.2015

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Bl Devnath

Date: 3/27/2015 8:31:00 AM

About control it's a nice poem read from you, my lovely friend. Beautifully done. Loved always,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/27/2015 10:15:00 AM

Thank you so kindly,BL,for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In His light! God bless you! :-) D.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/5/2015 5:20:00 PM

Excellent advice for anyone want to avoid chaos.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/6/2015 9:45:00 PM

Hello M.L. Kiser! Thank you so much my dearest friend for your very kind visit and comments! You're so sweet! Much appreciated! Have a wonderful weekend! God bless you! In His Light! :)Love and hugs! xxxx D.