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TAKE A LOOK AT ME NOW

Heard through the office grapevine the boss will now resign. Have to beat the deadline or that position won't be mine. I need to work and sacrifice no sleep tonight, a wink's just nice. Your Red Bull in my coffee I drank, now look at me! Thank you Lyric Man and FJ Thomas for the inspiration. Reminds me of those days of endless coffee and antacids. :-) Acknowledgment to flckr for the image of a Philippine tarsier Kim Patrice Nunez 26 June 2015

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Date: 6/30/2015 10:03:00 PM
I always thought you had your eyes on me!!!! Now I am sure of it!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/30/2015 2:52:00 PM
Funny one Kim!! I'm always wide awake when I read your work.. ;) Always, Laura
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Date: 6/28/2015 2:47:00 AM
And by the way, I DON'T look like that Philippine Tarsier when I'm wired. My eyes are BROWN thank you very much...
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Date: 6/27/2015 4:56:00 PM
ha ha, so this is what happens on coffee with Red bull. Fun poem with your picture!
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Date: 6/27/2015 3:08:00 PM
Yep, I've had my Red Bull days for sure. I've switched to 5-Hour Energy now (They CLAIM it's better for you) In addition, I mix it with extra caffeine Cappuccino to kill the taste...Talk about WIRED! Funny stuff here Kim! - Tim
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Date: 6/27/2015 7:46:00 AM
Ha ha! Now that is funny. Did you mean "Your Red Bull in my coffee"?
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Date: 6/27/2015 6:22:00 AM
A wonderful write and imagery. Excellent..........A.M.
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Date: 6/27/2015 12:22:00 AM
G'day Kim... very good Kim... picture perfect poem in fact - catch you soon - Lindsay
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Date: 6/26/2015 10:10:00 PM
Ha!Ha!Ha! That picture is perfect for your poem! He looks like he is hopped up on Red Bull and coffee! Cute write! Love, Kim M
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Date: 6/26/2015 6:54:00 AM
- No more Red Bull, dear beautiful Kim - Tarsier is not exactly pretty :))) - Love it :)) - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunshine Smile
Date: 6/26/2015 9:27:00 AM
..... adorable / ugly :))))
Date: 6/26/2015 6:11:00 AM
I love your Poem Kim, but you could at least ask permission if you're going to use a picture of me. lol
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Date: 6/26/2015 3:57:00 AM
Lol, funny. Yes those energy drinks will do that to you:-)
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KP Nunez
Date: 6/26/2015 4:06:00 AM
Hi Njeri! Haven't actually tried it on my coffee but got inspired by Dave's poem entitled Red Bull and FJ's blog A Poet Needs to Laugh. hugs!
Date: 6/26/2015 1:03:00 AM
You are so bold, the position is your for the taking! Sending good vibes your way :), jill
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