Cecilia Macfarlane Poet Limerick

Tainted Love

On Valentines day you broke my heart.
Having an affair wasn't too smart.
Something inside me died.
"Forgive me", you cried.
"Without you I will fall apart"

From your tainted love I have flown.
You thought I wouldn't make it on my own.
Now you see you were wrong.
Without you I am strong.
I would have left sooner had I known.

I bet you wish that I was still yours.
Life's so much better since I closed those doors.
Life is now sugary sweet.
Breathlessly swept off my feet.
Captured my heart is a man who adores.


Written by: Cecilia Macfarlane Jan 27/12
For Sidney ~ LeeAnn  contest : A Valentine Limerick

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Andrea Dietrich December 17, 2014 at 3:36 PM I believe I have seen every one of your poems, Dearie, so I just clicked on anything, and I remember this one. a very nicely rhymed one for valentine limericks.

Debbie Duncan March 29, 2013 at 11:25 PM this is nicely written Cecilia ;} thank you for reading my Set Yourself Free . You have a blessed Easter Sunday ;}

Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 11:24 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest Cecilia. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan April 16, 2012 at 10:31 AM congrats on your win! glad she had a happy ending afterall :)

Barbara Gorelick April 15, 2012 at 7:04 PM Nice rebound! lol..congrats on your win. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 13, 2012 at 10:36 PM congrats on an impressive win Cecilia ..luv..

Poet Destroyer A April 13, 2012 at 10:34 PM Cecilia~~wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD

Poet Destroyer A February 25, 2012 at 10:45 PM ooo... nice... is this contest... over with... hi... sending you soup mail...pd

John Loving Iii February 15, 2012 at 11:27 AM and the roller coaster rolls on.

Joe Flach February 13, 2012 at 5:17 PM If it taint faithful, then it taint love! "Sugary sweet" is definetly a better life to live.

Robert Pettit February 13, 2012 at 12:40 PM Nicely written set of limericks. This was an enjoyable read.

Matthew Anish February 13, 2012 at 11:14 AM Reminds me of the song"I will survive" which was popular a few years ago. Peace and Love Matthew Anish

Laila Andresen Mjelde February 6, 2012 at 5:00 AM I like your poem well done! Best wishes to you! - oxox Laila

Jon Arno February 4, 2012 at 4:57 PM I enjoyed reading this but I do hope it was fiction. If not...fly high dear Cecilia and dont look back. Jon

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2012 at 10:00 AM Well, all is well that ends well. GREAT ending for that tainted love he gave you, Cecilia. Best wishes in the contest!

Kash Poet January 28, 2012 at 6:28 AM Thanks for your kind comment at my page.

Kash Poet January 28, 2012 at 6:27 AM Very good set of Limericks here.I think this is for heartbreak contest.Best wishes to you.

Sara Kendrick January 27, 2012 at 5:26 PM Great to find a man who adores after having one who was fickled and stuck on himself..Enjoyed reading your story in poetic form..Sara

Brenda Victoria Northeast January 27, 2012 at 3:04 PM Beautifully written, life is bitter sweet- thank you for your kind comments on my work too Cecilia, blessings, Bren : )

Dan Kearley January 27, 2012 at 2:29 PM I like the way it ends... :o) At the begining I was thinking oh no! I don't want to be sad right now.But it came out nice. :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2012 at 1:58 PM Have a happy and lovely weekend Cecilia,and thank you for let me reading yours poem today.oxox love Anne-Lise