Tacit Feast

A bear cub dashing eastward found Gil Hillcrest.
Inebriated, joyfully kicking, laughing, merrily nauseated.
Observing practically quiet rapaciously stopped.
Tacitly, unexpectedly, voraciously, whipped, X-Gil.
Yesterday's zealous-zap!

So the story goes.
Tomorrows feast; who knows?
Opportunities like Gil Hillcrest are rare.
Practically a sitting duck; what luck!

The band at the bar began their break.
Their silent sojourn stopped; screaming started.
Happy hour halted hurriedly; Hillcrest!
Staggering, blood streaming steadily, 
“Stop” he shouted.
Wild-eyed, worried, the cub withdrew.
Just as mauling mama meandered on the scene,
Gil woke up…warily.

© July 13, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 7:42 AM
congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff, dane... : ) huggs
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July 19, 2011 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Aye, Aye, and A Mistress"contest. Love, Carol
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July 18, 2011 at 7:24 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your fantastic win in Debbie's contest.. a brilliant write luv..enjoy...
Poet Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Brilliant write....enjoyed.
Warden Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 11:02 AM
So glad he woke up..Great write here..Hugs
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