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Tacit Feast

A bear cub dashing eastward found Gil Hillcrest. Inebriated, joyfully kicking, laughing, merrily nauseated. Observing practically quiet rapaciously stopped. Tacitly, unexpectedly, voraciously, whipped, X-Gil. Yesterday's zealous-zap! So the story goes. Tomorrows feast; who knows? Opportunities like Gil Hillcrest are rare. Practically a sitting duck; what luck! The band at the bar began their break. Their silent sojourn stopped; screaming started. Happy hour halted hurriedly; Hillcrest! Staggering, blood streaming steadily, “Stop” he shouted. Wild-eyed, worried, the cub withdrew. Just as mauling mama meandered on the scene, Gil woke up…warily. © July 13, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 7/19/2011 7:42:00 AM
congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff, dane... : ) huggs
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Aye, Aye, and A Mistress"contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:24:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your fantastic win in Debbie's contest.. a brilliant write luv..enjoy...
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Date: 7/13/2011 12:20:00 PM
Brilliant write....enjoyed.
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Date: 7/13/2011 11:02:00 AM
So glad he woke up..Great write here..Hugs
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