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T,B,T,V

Too Busy To Visit. Must go can't stop I've got too much to do. Sorry must go can't stop no time to talk with you. I really have to run you see no time to make a fuss. If I don't get a move on then I will miss my bus. Miss your bus, miss your bus you've got too much to do can't stop won't stop, who needs a friend like you. Always running here, always running there. Always in a hurry never time to share. Maybe you should slow down, look around and see miss the bus you take to town and come and visit me. Must go, can't stop, it's all you ever say busy, busy all the time, you will not rest a day. Run, run you'll miss your bus, you really have to run. Well don't think I'll be waiting here when your day is done.

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Date: 10/9/2016 9:26:00 PM
I like this, Patricia - the way it is delivered and the message. Who knows why no comments??? I never get it. I think your poem aptly tells someone off poetically, in addition to the inferred 'slow down and smell the roses' .... CayCay
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