Systemic Lawlessness - Sci-Fi

Mars flew out of orbit
     Venus got rid of her gas
     Mercury sped past Pluto
     Jupiter shrunk her mass

     Saturn shed all her rings
     Neptune's water froze
     Uranus just flailed away
     Pluto's dog lost its nose

     The Solar System was freaking
     The 'Laws of Physics' creaking
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Leffanta Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Uranus has more earthly problems . . .Aloha! Rico
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:26 PM
I know. I know. ~ Hemorrhoid Harvey
Boles Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 10:21 PM
The planets were dumbfounded, now their orbits are a mess! Great job Gershon! anselmo
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:21 PM
Thank you, Anselmo! :) gw
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