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Synthesis

The staccato stammering of bass guitar’s play punctuated with the flash of purple strobe light. Limitless is the vista of black and gray fright ominously smothering the crowd’s ghoulish array. Framed, as if frozen, in this acid white display, some stagger in mimicking movements of blight trapped between the pulse of night and daylight Maudlin in the rigors of dapple-gray. Upon invisible strings they dance in disarray. Life existing only in the limits of after sight, entranced in the apocalyptic crash of might, the harsh, hard, synthesis disperses at mid-day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/21/2011 4:50:00 AM
Am working on my entry for u today without fail luv... so very busy right now but have ideas in mind to create internal rhyme... pleasant week luv..
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:35:00 AM
Bingo! If this is not for a contest , it's a winner in my book! In fact I would expect to see it in a book. So very well done, Debbie. Kudos to you.
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Date: 2/10/2011 1:41:00 PM
This looks like a good entry for Barbara's contest. It has great descriptiveness and rhyming throughout the presentation.
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