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Syntax for the Second Self

This body holds two of me—
the wild one,
and the one who pays for it.

I pack every want
into the shape of a pen,
but from a distance
ink looks more machine than magic.
Those who glance
only see gears,
not the slowing rhythm
or the misaligned clockwork
of a heart worn thin.

Even my hands
grow tired of reaching.
Now they lie still—
doormat deities
waiting at the edge
of your scattered attention.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/10/2025 10:37:00 PM
Your poem rings with futuristic metallic words. Gears and clockwork took my mind to a science lab. Alas, the last sentence reveals the end of romance.
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Date: 5/7/2025 11:13:00 PM
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 5/12/2025 7:47:00 AM
Thank you so much, Thriveni. Your work lately has been pretty terrific too. I was just headed there to see what you've cooked up since I last visited :)

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