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Symtoms

Time is a symtom of life and life is a symtom of time.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/28/2014 3:23:00 PM

Great one-liner..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/22/2014 10:00:00 PM

Strong truth here! Nicely stated!

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/13/2013 10:44:00 AM

Beautiful adoration on life and time. Loved much my friend. Always, bl

Joseph Sergi

Date: 11/24/2013 2:32:00 PM

hit the nail on the head

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2013 2:27:00 AM

A clever one. Congrats for your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/23/2013 7:44:00 PM

Congratulations on the fine win,john

Sarai Virden

Date: 11/23/2013 4:12:00 AM

I can't help but wonder at all the things you were thinking when you wrote this. Makes me just digest it's depth yet simplicity. Sweet write.

Mark Peterson

Date: 11/21/2013 1:00:00 PM

Concise and intense. Often these little ditties are trite and a little nauseous. Yours, on the other provokes deep reflection. I once wrote that the reason for time is change., and this accords with what you've written. Thanks for your words.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/20/2013 5:18:00 AM

Very deep expression, John