Symphony Orchestra

SYMPHONY ORCHESTRA

There’s a player up there
                          stomach resting on his chair
     blowing air
                          through at least a hundred feet of twisted    golden tubing
                                                   and 
A man putting oil on a slide
                          makes toothy talk aside
    to a skinny tuba player (imagine a tuba player being skinny)
                          who takes the fat horn on his lap

Drummers    four    all stand
                          Testing skins and whatnot with their hands
     The first selection    using such collection?
                           NOISY    indeed!

Then    there are the winds
                           All in a row    with chimneys on the end
    sucking       for dear life    it would seem
                           the flutist (or is it flautist?) is a dream

Finally    the violins    
                       adjusting gadgets     rooting with their chins
    cellos    (big violins)    screw into the floor
                       basses    (huge violins)     as a rule    sit astool

Here comes a fiddler    late
                   must have had a heavy date
    of all the nerve    he turns and bows
                   then sits    that’s more than law allows
                                       for

Here comes the conductor     with a stick!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/2/2011 6:00:00 PM
wonderful write .. my daily flavor from Daver luv.. did u hear about the construction worker in NYC who entertains his surrounding neighbors with singing Frank Sinatra all day long? he was on the news today and he is terrific ..he does this to drown down the noise of the construction in that area and people are loving it.. wow.. all kinds of wonders ...luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 7/27/2011 6:58:00 PM
This is great and unique Daver. I usually love reading your words on orchestras and symphonies. This one faked me out but I was still right there and liked it all the more. This is one of your masterpieces as far as putting the reader in the first row. Into my favs.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/27/2011 11:18:00 AM
Oh Daver, they'd better behave themselves when the conductor is holding "a stick"!:) Sounds like all is almost ready for the maestro. You weren't the "fiddler late", were you? Hmmm...:) This piece leaves one with expectant anticipation. I'm almost sitting on the edge of my seat! Well done, Daver...ENCORE! Best to you and yours, Love, Mikki
Login to Reply
Date: 7/25/2011 8:03:00 PM
The atmosphere is so very real. Sitting and listening to the orchestra warming up, noisy, discordant. Very cleverly written. really enjoyed rereading this one. Well done. xoxo
Login to Reply
Date: 7/25/2011 5:37:00 PM
Awesome write Dave ! I really liked this one dear poet, one day, I'll try and remember to find what page it's on, but I wrote "Trombone Fiddle Flute", I'll get back to you on that one. Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james
Login to Reply
Date: 7/23/2011 7:46:00 PM
Hi Daver, Wonderful verse. Loved your wonderful descriptions of this crazy orchestra and the noise it makes. Thanks for your visit and sweet comment.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/23/2011 3:49:00 PM
experimental and yet one that can be appreciated, daver!... awesome! :) huggs, nette
Login to Reply
Date: 7/23/2011 10:46:00 AM
Hey, I came here again and see I misspelled perfect. geeez, time for new glasses! WEll, daver,I bet you thinned out some after high school! Lots of people end up being their BEST long after high school. I was one of those!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2011 12:48:00 PM
this is a very clever idea, an orchestra warming up. PEFECT, Daver!! and thanks for the fun comments on Chris frogley (they called him frog legs, he was so tall and thin)! He became a chiro, like his dad, I heard and married with also a huge family. (so at least I escaped THAT fate. hahaha) Luv, Andrea (ps. I could stand a rich man though!!)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2011 12:36:00 PM
Enjoyed reading behind the scenes of the orchestra..Very creative work..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2011 11:42:00 AM
LOL I'd hate to be that fiddler seeing the conductor approaching with a stick. Like the way you compare all the string instruments to violins (but I would expect that from a violinist). You had me laughing out loud with the verse about the skinny tuba player, Daver. All the ones I've seen were rather large. Very much enjoyed your symphony in poetry! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2011 10:35:00 AM
Very interesting. The reader needs to really think about the message.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter